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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Fear No Evil"poems inspired by Psalm 23
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Comment from Ulla
You seem to have done this to perfection. I wouldn't even know where to start let alone end. Very well done and good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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You seem to have done this to perfection. I wouldn't even know where to start let alone end. Very well done and good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla
Comment Written 28-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Hi Ulla,
Thank you fro the kind comments. It is an interesting form, if you like puzzles. I appreciate the good luck wishes.
Debi
Comment from michaelcahill
One of the very few forms I actually fear a little bit. I have no sense. LOL
You have just nailed this. Each side reads perfectly in meter and rhyme. The acrostics read to perfection separately and even stronger together. Finally, the complete piece together truly shows the synergistic effect sought in the cleave form. It is certainly way more than twice the piece when combined. Just a super job on this difficult form. Masterful. A top contender for sure. mikey
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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One of the very few forms I actually fear a little bit. I have no sense. LOL
You have just nailed this. Each side reads perfectly in meter and rhyme. The acrostics read to perfection separately and even stronger together. Finally, the complete piece together truly shows the synergistic effect sought in the cleave form. It is certainly way more than twice the piece when combined. Just a super job on this difficult form. Masterful. A top contender for sure. mikey
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Hi Mikey,
Thank you for an entertaining review. You fear anything? I don't believe it. You say such kind things about the writing. I appreciate your thoughts about how this poem may do in the contest. Contender? I guess we will see. Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review.
Debi
Comment from ruzu27
Your cleave poem is correct and well-penned. The art work you have chosen to go with it is very nice und suits perfectly well. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.
I am sending you my best wishes for the contest.
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Your cleave poem is correct and well-penned. The art work you have chosen to go with it is very nice und suits perfectly well. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.
I am sending you my best wishes for the contest.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Thank you for the encouraging comments about the writing being well-penned. I appreciate the best wishes., too
Comment from Joy Graham
lYou did an amazing job, Debi :) The difficulty factor is tripled by writing two acrostics and putting them together to make one cleave poem. Wowsa! Best wishes in this contest. You have a fine entry.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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lYou did an amazing job, Debi :) The difficulty factor is tripled by writing two acrostics and putting them together to make one cleave poem. Wowsa! Best wishes in this contest. You have a fine entry.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Hi Joy,
Love the "Wowsa!" comment. It made me smile. I appreciate the generous six star rating. Thank you so much!
Comment from chcbeck
What a fantastic cleave poem It's beautifully written each part stands alone but then they fit together brilliantly. I love the poem the message of fear no evil trust in God good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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What a fantastic cleave poem It's beautifully written each part stands alone but then they fit together brilliantly. I love the poem the message of fear no evil trust in God good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for the six star rating! I appreciate the comments about the separate parts and the cleve when put together. I am pleased you enjoyed the message. Thank you for the good luck wishes.
Comment from Eternal Muse
A brilliant Cleave, oh, my God! My hat off to you, my friend, this is one of the most difficult forms today. I love the spiritual message and your terrific artistic prwsentation.
Wow! Good luck in the contest with this gem.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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A brilliant Cleave, oh, my God! My hat off to you, my friend, this is one of the most difficult forms today. I love the spiritual message and your terrific artistic prwsentation.
Wow! Good luck in the contest with this gem.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Hi Yeltel,
Thank you for the wonderful six star rating and the very encouraging comments. I am happy to hear you enjoyed the message and the presentation. Thank you for the good luck wishes.
Debi
Comment from BeasPeas
This is an impressive cleave poem that is so well done, I'm amazed.
The clarity of thought and smooth transitions make it a joy to read.
Please check out here for typo: "Or absorb you (your) grief and fears"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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This is an impressive cleave poem that is so well done, I'm amazed.
The clarity of thought and smooth transitions make it a joy to read.
Please check out here for typo: "Or absorb you (your) grief and fears"
Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Hi Marilyn,
Thank you for being the first to read and review this poem and for the very generous six star rating! I appreciate you catching that typo. Amazing how many times a person can read the same thing over and miss something so simple as an "r". Thank you for mentioning the smooth transitions. I am so flattered that you found this a joy to read.