Comment from James Dooney

Excellent

I used to be a police officer so I must admit I am still engaged by criminal stories ! Like this one 1 You have done well here !

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 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014

Hi, James. Thank you for this great review! I really admire anyone who has been a policeman. You folks are on the line each and every day. Unlike the hoopla that returning soldiers get, so often you are under-appreciated. I'm very gratified by your interest in my story!

Warmest regards, Bev

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Well, the journey has ended, Bev. I know I was on most of it with you and learned a lot from your writing.

Now, take a breather -- but for only a week or so -- until you begin another of Jana Burke's adventures.

I'll be there for each chapter.

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 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014

Jay, thank you for this most gracious reply. I don't think there's much at all I could 'teach' a very fine writer like you!

I'm not going to be doing a sequel for probably six months or so. I'll be busy whipping my current novel into shape with the help of an editor. However, I do have an old novel I didn't finish that will provide lighter material and a different kind of challenge. That's up next.

Again, thanks so much for this kind and very generous review, my friend.

:) Bev

reply by Jay Squires on 28-Aug-2014

Good luck with the editing, and when published, let me know.

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014

Thanks for the good wishes, Jay. I will certainly let you know if and when :) Bev