Response From Your Courtesan
What you do not see...53 total reviews
Comment from Kidlike101
The emotions here all but jump at you!
the complexity of the emotions, frustration, anger, yearning. all wrapped together in a way only a lover can experience. Well done Author!
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The emotions here all but jump at you!
the complexity of the emotions, frustration, anger, yearning. all wrapped together in a way only a lover can experience. Well done Author!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
Comment from Selina Stambi
send me long...lovely....letters ... these must surely be treasured, dear Jill, because e-mail has all but destroyed the art of letter writing!
there is still a place
in your heart that remains of
your need for us. .. you have such a wonderful, wistful way of wording, my dear.
Hugs and love and hope you are feeling better.
Sonali xxx
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send me long...lovely....letters ... these must surely be treasured, dear Jill, because e-mail has all but destroyed the art of letter writing!
there is still a place
in your heart that remains of
your need for us. .. you have such a wonderful, wistful way of wording, my dear.
Hugs and love and hope you are feeling better.
Sonali xxx
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
Comment from Rondeno
This one is from the heart, Jill! The emotion fizzes and crackles, and all but jumps off the page. There's both anger and yearning here. Great piece of writing.
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This one is from the heart, Jill! The emotion fizzes and crackles, and all but jumps off the page. There's both anger and yearning here. Great piece of writing.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
Comment from Lastamen
The heartstrings are plucking in this poignant rendition. The subject matter is intriguing as the pace and balance of the writing comes together. This young Courtesan has exposed the aching of her need. Raw emotion. Well done.
Till the last amen.
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The heartstrings are plucking in this poignant rendition. The subject matter is intriguing as the pace and balance of the writing comes together. This young Courtesan has exposed the aching of her need. Raw emotion. Well done.
Till the last amen.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
Comment from Starlit Ink
What we don't see are the emotions and longing from within, that go much beyond the surface. We need the physical hugs and pleasure, but the long letters of passion from the heart can profess a deeper understanding of romance. I like how the poem is deep but still sensual.
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What we don't see are the emotions and longing from within, that go much beyond the surface. We need the physical hugs and pleasure, but the long letters of passion from the heart can profess a deeper understanding of romance. I like how the poem is deep but still sensual.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
Comment from gazzagodbod
great poem my friend i particularly like the ending well written and presented my friend and thank you for sharing xxgazzaxx
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great poem my friend i particularly like the ending well written and presented my friend and thank you for sharing xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
Comment from SteveY
This is a very powerfully expressed poem of a deep love and affection that maybe shouldn't be, but yet is. Conflicted love but love none the same.
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This is a very powerfully expressed poem of a deep love and affection that maybe shouldn't be, but yet is. Conflicted love but love none the same.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Sounds like you didn't want him to leave and you are hoping he is missing you as much as you miss him.....
send me long...lovely....letters
each one drafted to remind me
that you still care
that are thinking about me
that there is still a place
in your heart that remains of
your need for us.
I hope you get your letters and he returns soon. xx Nancy
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Sounds like you didn't want him to leave and you are hoping he is missing you as much as you miss him.....
send me long...lovely....letters
each one drafted to remind me
that you still care
that are thinking about me
that there is still a place
in your heart that remains of
your need for us.
I hope you get your letters and he returns soon. xx Nancy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
Comment from tbacha58
Do I miss you?
yes I miss
your voice
your touch
your kisses
your laughter
and
mine
filling up my quiet rooms
Its such a sad poem, but I have to say, its so well written to attract attention in a strong message. Hope you are ok. Hugs Terry
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Do I miss you?
yes I miss
your voice
your touch
your kisses
your laughter
and
mine
filling up my quiet rooms
Its such a sad poem, but I have to say, its so well written to attract attention in a strong message. Hope you are ok. Hugs Terry
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
Comment from Leineco
I can feel the LOVE/HATE rolling off this poem.
I can feel the heartache and longing entwining
I can hear the deep-rooted desire
and the desperate prayers
I empathize with
the anguished lone silence.
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I can feel the LOVE/HATE rolling off this poem.
I can feel the heartache and longing entwining
I can hear the deep-rooted desire
and the desperate prayers
I empathize with
the anguished lone silence.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013