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Comment from Tithonus50
A very well expressed poem. Your form and structure in particular are sublime with great precision and detail in every word. This is a fantastic and meaningful poem.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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A very well expressed poem. Your form and structure in particular are sublime with great precision and detail in every word. This is a fantastic and meaningful poem.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
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Thank you o much fir reading and reviewing it.
Comment from vasquezsavage
This is a fantastic piece in its rhythem, structure, and flow. Alot of work went into this piece. Epic in nature and truly an inpired write. I am impressed. I only have one issue with it which does not affect the pieces quality or how truly well done it is. I personally have a problem Biblically with being compared to God as a creator; a small God. That issue, though, is one of theology; not how good the poem is. You are a very talented writer. Love reading your stuff. You have a great ability in descriptive verse and imagery; and you structure it in a way that reads well and I thoroughly enjoyed it. The one issue does not diminish it in any way; it is just my Biblical view of one line or thought pattern I don't agree with. I enjoyed this piece greatly! vs
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This is a fantastic piece in its rhythem, structure, and flow. Alot of work went into this piece. Epic in nature and truly an inpired write. I am impressed. I only have one issue with it which does not affect the pieces quality or how truly well done it is. I personally have a problem Biblically with being compared to God as a creator; a small God. That issue, though, is one of theology; not how good the poem is. You are a very talented writer. Love reading your stuff. You have a great ability in descriptive verse and imagery; and you structure it in a way that reads well and I thoroughly enjoyed it. The one issue does not diminish it in any way; it is just my Biblical view of one line or thought pattern I don't agree with. I enjoyed this piece greatly! vs
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much vasquez for this review. I fully understand your view. I made sure it was a little g and only meant it in relation to all other creatures on earth considering our free will and ability to read, write, think, and create.
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
Loved it and wish that I had a six to give you for this great piece! Love the photograph as well. i am an artist, so I appreciate that. Great introduction with questions constantly asked by people which then opens up into these beautiful nonets of the differences in the human and natural world that God created. Loved the ending, and do agree. Holly
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Loved it and wish that I had a six to give you for this great piece! Love the photograph as well. i am an artist, so I appreciate that. Great introduction with questions constantly asked by people which then opens up into these beautiful nonets of the differences in the human and natural world that God created. Loved the ending, and do agree. Holly
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much Holly, so glad you liked it. Your comments are appreciated.
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You are very welcome! :)
Comment from STEPHEN007
Wise words spoken by a wise man. It's comforting to know that someone like you thinks like I do.If only there were more like us.Congratulations on writing something wonderful and great which was a pleasure to read. Seasons greetings to you.
Regards Stephen
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Wise words spoken by a wise man. It's comforting to know that someone like you thinks like I do.If only there were more like us.Congratulations on writing something wonderful and great which was a pleasure to read. Seasons greetings to you.
Regards Stephen
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for this wonderful rating and the six stars. Seasons Greetings to you, too.
Comment from GarthL
That's a great message in those extended nonets Treischel.
Each of us unique in the overall grand design. The awesomeness of it all is truly something to behold!!
'There's a delicate mystery to this rounded planet,
Journey to the mountains,
Walk by the sea,
Look at the stars,
When the wonderment renews,
A sense of caring awakens,
This little blue planet needs our protection.' Garth
Indeed 'Like our Father we are creators too' and unfortunately sometimes destructors as well!
Good write mate and an enjoyable read thank you.
Is that another image of you in your 'hippy dayz'?!:-)
Garth
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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That's a great message in those extended nonets Treischel.
Each of us unique in the overall grand design. The awesomeness of it all is truly something to behold!!
'There's a delicate mystery to this rounded planet,
Journey to the mountains,
Walk by the sea,
Look at the stars,
When the wonderment renews,
A sense of caring awakens,
This little blue planet needs our protection.' Garth
Indeed 'Like our Father we are creators too' and unfortunately sometimes destructors as well!
Good write mate and an enjoyable read thank you.
Is that another image of you in your 'hippy dayz'?!:-)
Garth
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Thanks Garth. No, that is a picture a few days ago without my glasses as I grew my beard out to play Santa.
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I could certainly see it, just having a dig at you sorry! You'll be one very handsome Santa mate, and a jolly happy one too I'd bet!! Well done :0)
Comment from lakeport
The Creator's mind, that's a very heartfelt and inspirational expressed story poem, well written, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Lakeport.
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The Creator's mind, that's a very heartfelt and inspirational expressed story poem, well written, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Lakeport.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
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I really appreciate the review Lakeport. Thank you so much.
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your welcome,Lakeport.
Comment from ramfire
All that you write about God seems so very true. I like the verse constructions and free word formations. The picture is outstanding and goes so well with your poem. You too are a creator, for you have given us a poetic structure that will stand the ravages of time.
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All that you write about God seems so very true. I like the verse constructions and free word formations. The picture is outstanding and goes so well with your poem. You too are a creator, for you have given us a poetic structure that will stand the ravages of time.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
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Wow! What wonderful review. Thank you so much. I wish I wasn't out of reviewer recommendations.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Wow..I have to give you the thumbs way up on this. Even though I would mostly agree with you on ourselves being the little creators. This was a challenging write you presented in poetry formation. Very brilliant. warm picture too as to give God a face. Like the next door man...heh heh. Good luck and cheers.
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Wow..I have to give you the thumbs way up on this. Even though I would mostly agree with you on ourselves being the little creators. This was a challenging write you presented in poetry formation. Very brilliant. warm picture too as to give God a face. Like the next door man...heh heh. Good luck and cheers.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much Benjamin
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
Your poem is a mix of Nonets, Naans, free verse and others is cleverly written with terrific imagery:
The art work you used is priceless.
In your meaningful poem you've used excellent alliteration, wonderful metaphors, great rhyme and your narrative is very good.
I enjoyed your lines:
Now take a tree, There's no single type.
There are very many kinds about:
Pines, Oaks, Willows and Elms,
Just to name out a few,
And within the kind
No two are like.
They all have
Different
Shapes.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your food for thought poem to other reviewers.
Keep on writing creative poetry,
Please have a nice day,
Missy.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Poet,
Your poem is a mix of Nonets, Naans, free verse and others is cleverly written with terrific imagery:
The art work you used is priceless.
In your meaningful poem you've used excellent alliteration, wonderful metaphors, great rhyme and your narrative is very good.
I enjoyed your lines:
Now take a tree, There's no single type.
There are very many kinds about:
Pines, Oaks, Willows and Elms,
Just to name out a few,
And within the kind
No two are like.
They all have
Different
Shapes.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your food for thought poem to other reviewers.
Keep on writing creative poetry,
Please have a nice day,
Missy.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much Missy. I'm humbled.
Comment from Chuck23
This was really interesting! I loved the multiple Nonet poems! The image of you, I think is how many envision God... with a long white beard. Maybe it's just me, but I thought that added the perfect touch to this!
Good luck!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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This was really interesting! I loved the multiple Nonet poems! The image of you, I think is how many envision God... with a long white beard. Maybe it's just me, but I thought that added the perfect touch to this!
Good luck!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Thank you Chuck. I'm smiling, now.