All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Alone in Paris"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from ameen786
Sharyn my friend, the best ever romance poem I have seen/read on this site and the win/prize is testament to that fact; perfect picture to match your outstanding verse that's simply mesmerizingly hot! (not sure if mesmerizingly is a word, but I know you know what I mean); congratulations and thanks for the delightful treat, I only wish I had a six.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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Sharyn my friend, the best ever romance poem I have seen/read on this site and the win/prize is testament to that fact; perfect picture to match your outstanding verse that's simply mesmerizingly hot! (not sure if mesmerizingly is a word, but I know you know what I mean); congratulations and thanks for the delightful treat, I only wish I had a six.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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Bless you ameen - I had a fun sizzle writing this one - thank you so much for the lovely compliments! :) Sharyn
Comment from justatuna
Duh! Had to give you a 6 for this. Truly an amazing write. I was listening to 'Hotel California' while reading. It seemed perfect. You really caught me in the scene like a movie. Well done my friend.
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Duh! Had to give you a 6 for this. Truly an amazing write. I was listening to 'Hotel California' while reading. It seemed perfect. You really caught me in the scene like a movie. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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Thanks Rob - I just saw that prompt and had to go for it - I'm a sucker for romance. What a sweetie, with your '6'! :) Sharyn
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What I liked the most is that it read like a move scene. Very unique.
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that was running through my head! so there we are - must have been on the same B&W passion wavelength - it's such fun to "stretch" writing muscles with some of these prompts Rob - gets my imagination stirring - it sometimes needs a good kick! :)
Comment from Cindy Warren
I don't think they'll be alone for long. Your poem makes it easy to imagine these two getting to know each other. They say Paris is the city of love.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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I don't think they'll be alone for long. Your poem makes it easy to imagine these two getting to know each other. They say Paris is the city of love.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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Thx Cindy - this was such a fun write. Who could resist such a prompt?
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Okay, through with that cold shower! Still blushing. LOL This well-written poem does a great job of conveying the theme of lust at first sight in the perfect place--Paris. This is very good--easy to see why it won the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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Okay, through with that cold shower! Still blushing. LOL This well-written poem does a great job of conveying the theme of lust at first sight in the perfect place--Paris. This is very good--easy to see why it won the contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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thx Janice - how was that shower??? getting a bit chillier over your way I think! Thank you for having fun with me :) Sharyn
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Cold shower? Ice bath! This is hot-hot-HOT, Sharyn, and still classy in your skillful use of metaphor. Congratulations on your win. :) nancy
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Cold shower? Ice bath! This is hot-hot-HOT, Sharyn, and still classy in your skillful use of metaphor. Congratulations on your win. :) nancy
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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thx Nancy - I had fun writing this one!
Comment from Charmane
Very nice! This write sort of pulls you in no matter how hard you try to resist.Comical, imaginative and enchanting. An excellent write.
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Very nice! This write sort of pulls you in no matter how hard you try to resist.Comical, imaginative and enchanting. An excellent write.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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Thx Nancy - glad you enjoyed the fun aspect of this one too, because it was great fun writing it!
Comment from adewpearl
Congratulations on your win. This meets the requirements of the contest perfectly as you imply so much more to come but never cross that line which would require a sex rating.
I love the repetition of alone in Paris and the wonderful sensory appeal - the part about splitting the peach is a great example of this :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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Congratulations on your win. This meets the requirements of the contest perfectly as you imply so much more to come but never cross that line which would require a sex rating.
I love the repetition of alone in Paris and the wonderful sensory appeal - the part about splitting the peach is a great example of this :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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Thx Brooke - that was the fun part - not going too far! Who could resist such a prompt!?
Comment from l.raven
Sharyn, This is really great. You so earned all the rewards with this. Now excuse me I think I will pack and go to Paris. And totally not to long. HoT!!!!! Very well done. Linda xxoo
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Sharyn, This is really great. You so earned all the rewards with this. Now excuse me I think I will pack and go to Paris. And totally not to long. HoT!!!!! Very well done. Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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Bless you Linda! Thank you so much! This was an extraordinarily fun write for me - just saw the prompt and couldn't resist. Thank you big time for keeping one of your magic sixes for me, too! :) Sharyn
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You are so welcome. xxoo
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I can really understand how you won this contest, my goodness it has everything!! The way you have written this, the style is brilliant! If I'd had a 6 it would be yours. Excellent! xsx
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I can really understand how you won this contest, my goodness it has everything!! The way you have written this, the style is brilliant! If I'd had a 6 it would be yours. Excellent! xsx
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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Thx so much Sandra - I just saw the prompt and couldn't resist - it was a fun write for me (different from rage! thank goodness!)
Blessings,
Sharyn
Comment from Dopeless Hopefiend
Wow. No wonder this is a contest winner. I will use one of my two final six star ratings on this piece because that was probably one of the most well written, sexy adventures through poetry I have ever taken.
Amazing job, vivid imagery, well used vocabulary. Great work.
-D.H
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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Wow. No wonder this is a contest winner. I will use one of my two final six star ratings on this piece because that was probably one of the most well written, sexy adventures through poetry I have ever taken.
Amazing job, vivid imagery, well used vocabulary. Great work.
-D.H
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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DH you've made my morning!!!! Thank you SO much for your lovely review, and for saving a "six" for me!!! yeah!!! Merci beaucoup mon cher!!!:) Sharyn
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Your very welcome Sharyn. Thank you for writing that piece!