Comment from PUPA

Excellent

Hi Sue,
Where have you been? I like this poem,it is so clever because it is the shortest with all needed words included, yet they flow so smoothly and nothing is forced.
Good luck.
Love
Pupa

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from Domino

Excellent

Hi, Sue
Great to see you back, and I hope you're well.
So clever to include all the words so smoothly in so short a poem. Great snappy little rhymer depicting the ups and downs of romance. Best wishes and good luck, Ray xx

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from AMORE AGENT

Excellent

Hello,

I hope your well?

I really liked this poem. It was well written, flowed well, Well done!

I have written a poem called Sema on page 5. Let me know what you think?

Have a nice day.

Ciao for now! (:

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from rhymelord

Excellent

Dear Sue,
Great to see some work from you again. This one is just pure genius. I would need 8 stanzas to do what you have done in 8 lines and in absolutely perfect rhyme and metre.
Regards
Reg

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from pilarblue

Excellent

Oh, this is very cool! Outstanding piece here, Sixteezkid. You fit in a great rhythm and rhyme and the presentation is a great touch. :)

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Superb entry for this contest. Artistically presented and cleverly uses all the words with brevity and style and so that they seamlessly fit the theme.

Strong theme. Highly expressive.

And even rhymes.

Bravo.

Best of luck.

No spags.

Love, rd

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from MaureenC

Excellent

Sixteezkid, I am no poetry techie but I do love to read it. I think I envy a person with the talent to write a good poem, but how much more do I envy one who can take a certain set of unrelated words and make sense of them in poem form.
Well done
Maureenc

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from becky7777

Excellent

interesting take on the words. how the mind and the heart take different views on life. great writting. good luck in the contest.
Becky

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from sharon fallis

Excellent

Short and sweet. Best way to read them. This is a well thought out and portrayed poem. Lots of good word choices and usage. Good visuals and great imagery. Sharon

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2009

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Welcome back--I've missed you and your wonderful poems. Your verse captures how varied emotions are and how quickly they change. You used the required words without making them feel at all forced. Your strong rhymes were a bonus. The title, picture and color you chose reverberated with your theme.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2009