Comment from treaclemoon

Excellent

A perfect match of words and image, you have so much colour packed into your haiku, "summer green, yellows, reds and golds" The patchwork quilt image is lovely too. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2009

Comment from Roisin

Excellent

Hi Sue,

What a beautiful haiku. I love the comparison to a patchwork quilt. Great word choices and vivid imagery. Good luck in the contest.

Hugs

Roisin

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2009

Comment from Domino

Excellent

Hi, Sue
I love 'summer green' and the use of 'yield'. Very poetic presentation. Autumn's a hard one as most descriptions have been used before. Great package overall.
Good luck n love, Ray xx

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2009

Comment from Freeflyer

Excellent

This is very good. The imagery depicts autumn exactly as it is with the changing colours. The patchwork quilt idea is superb. Great write. Good luck in the competition.
Freeflyer

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2009

Comment from Helvi2

Excellent

Hi Sixteez,
You definately found the right image for your poem. The foliage looks like a beautiful quilt. I don't know if you wrote the poem first or got the picture and wrote about it.The combination of the imagery you create with words and the picture are supberb! It is a lovely haiku. I loved everything about it. :o)

Good Luck in the Contest
Helvi :o)

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2009

Comment from words

Excellent

Loved the photo you chose...set it up beautifully.

Well done Haiku...I can see, smell and taste the season.

Good job!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2009

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

This is a cool entry Sue, very nice friend, I'm curious what came first the poem or the artwork because they fit stunningly perfect together. Awesome!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2009

Comment from moosegal

Excellent

Lovely haiku, although it's so hard to think of autumn while I'm cranking the heater here at home. Fun thing having an "autumn" contest while we're eagerly awaiting the warmth of spring. The picture goes so well with your haiku. I love the phrase "atumn's patchwork quilt". Beautiful.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2009

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Love this one, Sue. It is a stunning, gorgeous photo that perfectly matches your theme. Also a very well crafted haiku with a marvelous closing line,. This should do well in contest. Wish you luck in voting booth.

Bravo!
I love it.

Warm Regards,
rama devi

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2009

Comment from skye

Excellent

Every season has its own personal beauty, but the richness of autumn is so gorgeous, and the idea of a quilt is a wonderful image in this poem.
Love it.
Very well done.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2009