CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Universal Interest"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is a first-rate piece
of verse, with a smooth flow
to the words, and to both
rhythm and rhyme.
Very well penned, my friend.
Margaret.
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This is a first-rate piece
of verse, with a smooth flow
to the words, and to both
rhythm and rhyme.
Very well penned, my friend.
Margaret.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from RADIO
Very clever poem that teaches
as well as holds ones interest
all through. Great ending, no science,
just fun, and as the beatles sing,
"Here comes the sun." Well done.
Radio
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Very clever poem that teaches
as well as holds ones interest
all through. Great ending, no science,
just fun, and as the beatles sing,
"Here comes the sun." Well done.
Radio
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from chaswriter
Sue - Can you imagine what this world would be like without the 23 1/2 degree tilt? No changing of seasons. The north and south perpetually in cold. The girth being hot. Enjoyed it with its good rhyme and rhythm. Charlie
PS - If you get a chance, read my story "The Machinist". You might get a laugh out of it.
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Sue - Can you imagine what this world would be like without the 23 1/2 degree tilt? No changing of seasons. The north and south perpetually in cold. The girth being hot. Enjoyed it with its good rhyme and rhythm. Charlie
PS - If you get a chance, read my story "The Machinist". You might get a laugh out of it.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from rmdelta
sue, I think I know what this was about, but I won't make a bet on it. I'll just write enough to take your money this time and hope you come to your senses next time. lol
Reggie
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sue, I think I know what this was about, but I won't make a bet on it. I'll just write enough to take your money this time and hope you come to your senses next time. lol
Reggie
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from fictionwriter
I love this poem. The universe is an ordered and wonderful place. I too am looking forward to spring. I can't wait. Great job.
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I love this poem. The universe is an ordered and wonderful place. I too am looking forward to spring. I can't wait. Great job.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from lkatka
Thank goodness for that tilt! I am so looking forward to spring as I am now in the middle of a March blizzard. I wonder what it would be like to live near the Equator. Nice poem.
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Thank goodness for that tilt! I am so looking forward to spring as I am now in the middle of a March blizzard. I wonder what it would be like to live near the Equator. Nice poem.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from rama devi
THOUGHTFUL AND WELL SCRIPTED IN IAMBIC RHYTHMS. NICE PRESENTATION WITH ARTWORK AND COLOR CHOICES. OOPS! Did not mean to press capslock...
The closing couplet brings a playful element to otherwise heady verse.
:)
No nits.
Fondly,
rama devi
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THOUGHTFUL AND WELL SCRIPTED IN IAMBIC RHYTHMS. NICE PRESENTATION WITH ARTWORK AND COLOR CHOICES. OOPS! Did not mean to press capslock...
The closing couplet brings a playful element to otherwise heady verse.
:)
No nits.
Fondly,
rama devi
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from amada
This is a very clever and insightful write in the marvels of our universe, and the master hand you created it. Reading it I felt grateful and humble.
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This is a very clever and insightful write in the marvels of our universe, and the master hand you created it. Reading it I felt grateful and humble.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from jeslaf
Ha! I am rejoicing with and for you, though we've begun our steady sunny 80's here in FL. I'm checking photography websites to witness the waking up of the great northwest/BC, Canada, my fave places. Enjoy it!
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Ha! I am rejoicing with and for you, though we've begun our steady sunny 80's here in FL. I'm checking photography websites to witness the waking up of the great northwest/BC, Canada, my fave places. Enjoy it!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from Roisin
What a lovely sonnet Sue. You never cease to amaze me with your broad knowledge and the fact you always come up with new ideas for poem. Your rhymes and rhythm are perfect as always. Great job.
Hugs
Roisin
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What a lovely sonnet Sue. You never cease to amaze me with your broad knowledge and the fact you always come up with new ideas for poem. Your rhymes and rhythm are perfect as always. Great job.
Hugs
Roisin
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009