CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from rama devi
Hello dear sister. Bravo for a very powerful and well composed rictameter! Impressive word choices and internal rhyming...especially in these lines:
Using then discarding after
Masquerading and parading untruths
Neverminding the aftermath
Or damaged swath of pain
Well done.
Lots of love,
rama devi
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2009
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Hello dear sister. Bravo for a very powerful and well composed rictameter! Impressive word choices and internal rhyming...especially in these lines:
Using then discarding after
Masquerading and parading untruths
Neverminding the aftermath
Or damaged swath of pain
Well done.
Lots of love,
rama devi
Comment Written 08-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2009
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rama devi!!!! She's back!! So good to hear from you. Hope you are doing well! I'm all excited because it's just great to see your name here in a review again. Must make sure your name is on my fanlist so I don't miss your work. Thank you so much for this great review with all your very specific comments. With warmest regards, Sue :-))
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Thank you sweet sister~
Love, rd
Comment from Sissy Holly Grace
An abundance of poetic technique in this poem from brilliant assonance to strong alliteration. Plenty of information in a short poem. A most rewarding read.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2009
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An abundance of poetic technique in this poem from brilliant assonance to strong alliteration. Plenty of information in a short poem. A most rewarding read.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2009
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I appreciate all your very specific comments on this work and the lovely compliments given. Means so much and is very encouraging. With regards, Sue
Comment from rmdelta
Sue, this was an interesting little writing, my friend. It sounds so depressing in a way so I hope it is all made up. lol I have a plan you should adopt, Sue. Send the dollars to me and I'll make sure you're listed on the contests, ok?
Reggie
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2009
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Sue, this was an interesting little writing, my friend. It sounds so depressing in a way so I hope it is all made up. lol I have a plan you should adopt, Sue. Send the dollars to me and I'll make sure you're listed on the contests, ok?
Reggie
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2009
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Reggie,
You are SO sweet*. What a nice offer with all intentions for my own good. I know you will look after me! Bless your heart and thank you for your wonderful review.
Sue
*see poem you just reviewed
Comment from Kingsland
the art work presented for your thoughts are very surreal and fit those words perfectly. Your poem touches on the vibrations of one and all of us. This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
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the art work presented for your thoughts are very surreal and fit those words perfectly. Your poem touches on the vibrations of one and all of us. This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2009
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John, thank you for your very kind review and for commenting on the artwork. With warmest regards, Sue