CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Janet65
Hi,
A poem that truly speaks about something in the narrator's life that they are not happy with. I didn't know it was winter until I read your notes. The poem is well written, it flows well and the rhyme scheme is fine.
Janet
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Hi,
A poem that truly speaks about something in the narrator's life that they are not happy with. I didn't know it was winter until I read your notes. The poem is well written, it flows well and the rhyme scheme is fine.
Janet
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2009
Comment from jaeladarling
I like this line:
"This climate does not suit my soul"
But then, I like the entire weather metaphor you have going here. Wonderfully done!
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I like this line:
"This climate does not suit my soul"
But then, I like the entire weather metaphor you have going here. Wonderfully done!
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2009