CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 138 "The feeling's mutual..."A collection of poetry
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Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Sixteezkid, I had a couple of high school English teachers who would marvel that I write poetry now as I would stare at blank sheets of paper in high school and wait for similar motivation when required to write poetry about a particular subject. Even now, the motivation normally comes before I ever see the paper. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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Sixteezkid, I had a couple of high school English teachers who would marvel that I write poetry now as I would stare at blank sheets of paper in high school and wait for similar motivation when required to write poetry about a particular subject. Even now, the motivation normally comes before I ever see the paper. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from carolm5415
Great and oh how true as I often stare at a blank computer screen and wonder what the hell I am going to do with those required words for a poem!
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Great and oh how true as I often stare at a blank computer screen and wonder what the hell I am going to do with those required words for a poem!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from Fleedleflump
Ah, an expertly expressed two-way relationship! I often wish that the darned page would come up with some of its own ideas, or at the very least give me some pointers :-). A well deserving winner says I.
Fleedleflump
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Ah, an expertly expressed two-way relationship! I often wish that the darned page would come up with some of its own ideas, or at the very least give me some pointers :-). A well deserving winner says I.
Fleedleflump
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from Chadt
Simple but brilliant:) i'ts amazing how a few simple words can be so powerful. Despite it's shortness and simplicity i have to wonder how long you thought about it before you wrote it down? I really enjoyed keep going:)
Chadt
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Simple but brilliant:) i'ts amazing how a few simple words can be so powerful. Despite it's shortness and simplicity i have to wonder how long you thought about it before you wrote it down? I really enjoyed keep going:)
Chadt
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from Aussie
I liked your simple poem and can relate to your subject; being an artist myself, a blank canvas can be so daunting. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.
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I liked your simple poem and can relate to your subject; being an artist myself, a blank canvas can be so daunting. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from justmade
I think this is fantastic. I love your creativity to come up with these lines for this poem. I think it's a stroke of genius.
Much love,
Justmade.
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I think this is fantastic. I love your creativity to come up with these lines for this poem. I think it's a stroke of genius.
Much love,
Justmade.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from cmay44
Hi sixteezkid
Excellent well-written poem with the perfect coloring and artwork to go with it. job well done on this nice Naani poem.
God bless
love from
Carolyn
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Hi sixteezkid
Excellent well-written poem with the perfect coloring and artwork to go with it. job well done on this nice Naani poem.
God bless
love from
Carolyn
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from flea0420
Perfect depiction of writer's block "empty canvas stares blankly back at artist" and "beckoning to be brushed by strokes of genius" The horrors of that empty canvas haunt us all but both canvas and artist are rewarded in the end.
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Perfect depiction of writer's block "empty canvas stares blankly back at artist" and "beckoning to be brushed by strokes of genius" The horrors of that empty canvas haunt us all but both canvas and artist are rewarded in the end.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from raimie
Awesome! Oh the blank canvas is as bad as the blank page or screen! Well, it's all the same, Lol What a wonderful job you did of telling the canvas's tale, of it's blocked artist. No spag found at all.
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Awesome! Oh the blank canvas is as bad as the blank page or screen! Well, it's all the same, Lol What a wonderful job you did of telling the canvas's tale, of it's blocked artist. No spag found at all.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Sixteezkid,
I enjoyed this Naaini poem - good form and syllable count.
I particularly liked:
Blankly back at artist
(think the artist should draw some eyes on that canvas ... so that when it "blankly stares back at the Artist" it will at least bare its eyes - LOL)
Good luck in the contest. Regards, LateBloomer
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Hello Sixteezkid,
I enjoyed this Naaini poem - good form and syllable count.
I particularly liked:
Blankly back at artist
(think the artist should draw some eyes on that canvas ... so that when it "blankly stares back at the Artist" it will at least bare its eyes - LOL)
Good luck in the contest. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008