A Paper Time Capsule
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Comment from Ulla
Absolutely, Barbara. The Internet has a lot of positive going for for all the reasons you're giving.
But it also has a lot of potential dangers. As you say, ki ki e everything in this life it's about balance. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Absolutely, Barbara. The Internet has a lot of positive going for for all the reasons you're giving.
But it also has a lot of potential dangers. As you say, ki ki e everything in this life it's about balance. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
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Comment from GWHARGIS
I'm not sure about the boundaries on these letters but I'd love to see a little more personal anecdotes or experiences. I love your writing so I don't think you'd mess it up. I just don't hear your voice in this. It's written very well and clear but it isn't Barbara. But I don't know what they are looking for. Gretchen
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I'm not sure about the boundaries on these letters but I'd love to see a little more personal anecdotes or experiences. I love your writing so I don't think you'd mess it up. I just don't hear your voice in this. It's written very well and clear but it isn't Barbara. But I don't know what they are looking for. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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I know. That's why I'm going to add additional letter without the boundaries when I finish these. I'll be adding them later. I can only do one thing at a time with editing my novel and writing a new one. Thank you for the support.
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I hear you. Editing is a pain. Loving Faith. If you couldn't tell. Gretchen
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your letter was informative, Barbara.
I liked how you added both the pros
and cons. When used responsibly, the
internet is a great tool. However, so man
act irresponsibly hiding behind a screen
and writing hate filled diatribes. You gave
readers much to think about.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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Your letter was informative, Barbara.
I liked how you added both the pros
and cons. When used responsibly, the
internet is a great tool. However, so man
act irresponsibly hiding behind a screen
and writing hate filled diatribes. You gave
readers much to think about.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
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Comment from Ben Colder
Is it not amazing how we can enjoy life once again when we leave our phones home while proving how long we made it without it. Good one, Barb. Right on.
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Is it not amazing how we can enjoy life once again when we leave our phones home while proving how long we made it without it. Good one, Barb. Right on.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with your post Barbara, the internet is, in many ways, a dangerous place for children. My Grandchildren have been bullied with text messages and there have been tears. It is also very addictive too, my 7 year old Grandson had a fit when we turned off the internet once and said it was bedtime, his behaviour was appalling. A wise post Barbara, much enjoyed and very informative, love Dolly x
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I so agree with your post Barbara, the internet is, in many ways, a dangerous place for children. My Grandchildren have been bullied with text messages and there have been tears. It is also very addictive too, my 7 year old Grandson had a fit when we turned off the internet once and said it was bedtime, his behaviour was appalling. A wise post Barbara, much enjoyed and very informative, love Dolly x
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Comment from Paul McFarland
This is great advice, Barb. Hopefully Charlotte and Eleanor will have been advised before they reach fourteen and twelve. Maybe you should consider giving the letter to them early.
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This is great advice, Barb. Hopefully Charlotte and Eleanor will have been advised before they reach fourteen and twelve. Maybe you should consider giving the letter to them early.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the support. I thought about the earlier part. Their parents are very picky about their TV time now, so I'm pretty sure they will be as they get older.
Comment from JSD
Sweet and simple message, conveyed in exactly the most appropriate tone and language. A really good idea too. One for all of us to try, I think. Well done and thank you.
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Sweet and simple message, conveyed in exactly the most appropriate tone and language. A really good idea too. One for all of us to try, I think. Well done and thank you.
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Barbara, I enjoy these letters and think it is a great idea but I want to hear your voice coming through much more because, with your vivid imagination and skill, I just think your granddaughters will really appreciate this. Your text sounds too much lifted off the internet for me and a bit soulless. That said, I know you've decided to stick to prompts but I just sense this is going against your instincts. Hope you don't mind - just my thoughts. Maybe if you could have recorded a really bad incident or a life-saving one that happened to yourself or another on the internet? Take care Debbie
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Barbara, I enjoy these letters and think it is a great idea but I want to hear your voice coming through much more because, with your vivid imagination and skill, I just think your granddaughters will really appreciate this. Your text sounds too much lifted off the internet for me and a bit soulless. That said, I know you've decided to stick to prompts but I just sense this is going against your instincts. Hope you don't mind - just my thoughts. Maybe if you could have recorded a really bad incident or a life-saving one that happened to yourself or another on the internet? Take care Debbie
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
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I have thought about what you've said and that's why I'm going to be adding additional letter. What I have to say is very much longer than these letters allow. Thank you.
Comment from papa55mike
There are so many amazing sites on the internet, but the pits of hell also reside there. What a wonderfully written essay. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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There are so many amazing sites on the internet, but the pits of hell also reside there. What a wonderfully written essay. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
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Comment from prettybluebirds
On Facebook, there are so many ads for products that common sense should tell a person they are scams. Some are so obvious I don't understand why they are allowed in the first place. I do love the fact that the internet allows us instant access to so many different things. Thanks for sharing this writing with us.
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On Facebook, there are so many ads for products that common sense should tell a person they are scams. Some are so obvious I don't understand why they are allowed in the first place. I do love the fact that the internet allows us instant access to so many different things. Thanks for sharing this writing with us.
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
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