Comment from
Rosemary Everson1
Line dancing is a great way to begin your story. Many like this type of dancing and it's great exercise. The beginning of your story is introducing your main characters. Story sounds exciting.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from
Ben Colder
This sounds as if the place is a small cozy little town that hardly any crime. I think I could be in for a good read. So we are in the midst of cleaning a cut foot.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
Thank you for the support.