Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hello Sandra, an exciting and well set out chapter. Your font choice problem you have sweated over has been solved and it is just fine. Good, bold font. The language and subject is quite complicated - I forget how old Eric is?
I know it is a long time ago that you were writing the Animal ABC for him, so I assume he understands all the space jargon and the meaning behind Herbie evolving, etc. However, it is very well written and. when it comes to space travel, etc. kids lap it up and really enjoy these stories. Well done Sandra - keep up the good work. Love Dorothy xxx

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020

Eric is twelve now. I think, if the stories continue, he'll have to stay a 12 year-old for ever! lol. Drozig is a shape-shifter, and began his part in these stories as a dinosaur in bk one. Goodness me, I'm really letting people know the truth about all the myths they've been taught. lol.
It's so funny you mentioned the ABC book I wrote for him. I've taken it out of storage and decided to update the whole book. Having one letter at a time and giving more information about each animal. I'll still have a small poem, but then I'll write the prose underneath. This would be more for the 'junior' schools, apposed to the very young children. What do you think? Having been invited to read in schools, (put on hold now) I thought they would go down well. Children could ask questions and become more involved.
Take care, my friend, and stay safe. Lots of love Sandra. xxx

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Going ceaseless, true adventurous, even more surprises; Eric has foresight, while he is intelligent, he is more concerned about Earth, he is prospective and winning by nature; more secrets to reveal; waiting with interest; well said, well done.

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 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020

Thank you so much for your continued support, my friend. I'm so pleased you are enjoying my story. Take care and stay safe! :)) Sandra xx

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Earth can't possibly be zapped, Sandra! I expect that Eric will have to find a way to either get humanity to stop fighting, or get the Wise Ones to see that humanity has a way to go, and must evolve at their own pace. I think that Herbie might be instrumental in that. :)

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 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020

Eric was given 50 years by the Wise Ones, in book one, to get the Earth to be a peaceful. They have been keeping an eye on Eric since he visited Drozig's planet. Eric managed to persuade them not to zap it then, lol. Thanks for reading this part, Susan, I really appreciate it. Don't worry, Earth is in safe hands! :)) Sandra xx

reply by susand3022 on 05-Apr-2020

50 years eh... that's a long time to be away from home! I hope his mother isn't waiting dinner for him! LOL

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020

LOL!! No, he's not going anywhere. He will grow up and become head of world security. I've already got his future mapped out for him! LOL.