Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

First of all, are you sick, should I be worried? I had to look up what a phlebotomist is and someone is going to suck your blood it appears.
What magazines do you think they should add for the female perspective?
Other people's systems seem guaranteed to vex us; you have pointed this out very humorously in your well-observed manner.

Please explain: "What you YOU do if you were the only person" (is this meant to be "What would YOU do etc.?)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019

1)The blood test was for the impending annual physical.
2)How about "Glamour," or "Cosmo"? Is that asking so much?! I'd even be okay with "Reader's Digest" or "AARP," I think...
3)There's a tv show here called "What Would You Do?", and the host is a journalist named John Quinones. They set up fake scenarios and then film how the real people observing them react.

So thank you for terrific review! xo

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a great write, Rachelle. You definitely have a writer's eye in noticing all the details that you noted in this piece. You did well to play it cool and not fly off the handle. Your writings are always a real pleasure to read and I'm always pleased when you release a new one. Great job.

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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019

Oh, 24chas - I see what you did there: Not FLY off the handle. har, har. Funny.

Thanks very much for this lovely review. I always appreciate what you have to say about my writing. xo

reply by 24chas on 16-Apr-2019

See, you proved my point. You noticed that seemingly innocuous statement.

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019

Hahaha. Got me! Guilty as charged. xo