Act of Endurance
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Comment from meeshu
your use of language is very curious and compelling. I like the way it is crazy vague and still tells a story. I know I have liked some of your work in the past but this is your best so far. it floats a little closer to the shore. well done Tpac......meeshu
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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your use of language is very curious and compelling. I like the way it is crazy vague and still tells a story. I know I have liked some of your work in the past but this is your best so far. it floats a little closer to the shore. well done Tpac......meeshu
Comment Written 16-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Trying to correct past grammar flaws, hoping new revisions bring forth a more comprehensive read. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting words.
Comment from kiwijenny
This was hard to read and understand for me,,,
neither being they able to go to explore....what does this mean?
Predators they who supplied a table
Either young was capable to do now??????????????
God bless. Sorry I just don't understand
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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This was hard to read and understand for me,,,
neither being they able to go to explore....what does this mean?
Predators they who supplied a table
Either young was capable to do now??????????????
God bless. Sorry I just don't understand
Comment Written 16-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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No problem. I can feel your views about this write. I do have problem in expressing myself why words from reviews help. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
Comment from Kathryn Swope
I normally do not like poetry that does not flow but I enjoyed this poem. Each stanza left me guessing about the story behind the poem. Thank you for sharing this poem.
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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I normally do not like poetry that does not flow but I enjoyed this poem. Each stanza left me guessing about the story behind the poem. Thank you for sharing this poem.
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Most my writes suffers slight flaws in their structuring, aspects need of revisions. Thanking you for your generous rate and helpful views.
Comment from Ricky1024
Houses about our furry little friend to keep us company and are they are to the end unfortunately we always Outlast them this was well-written of course thanks for just stuck to Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Houses about our furry little friend to keep us company and are they are to the end unfortunately we always Outlast them this was well-written of course thanks for just stuck to Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Glad aspects of this write was found appealing, still lack in areas. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.