Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Poem! In so few words the author wrote a a great 1-6-1 poem.
The author words were clever, made the reader smile and were creative.
The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme and words of this poem.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016

HI Maria, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...xxoo

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

I like the picture of Goofy. It assures the reader the message will be humorous. Your syllables are correct for the contest requirements. I like that you rhymed your three lines. That isn't easy to do in such a short form. I see the rules call for rhymes. Wow! Good job. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016

HI Joy, thank you so much...I am so glad you like it...I love Goofy...LOL...xxoo

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Somehow I can see a hidden, or not so hidden political message here. Or is it just my imagination? Either way I think you have a cute message here.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016

HI DonandVicki, just your imagination...LOL...thank you so very much for a great review...so glad you like it...xxoo

Comment from Matthew Franklin

Excellent

HAHA :) Watch out for the first step it's a doozy!! I always remember hearing that as a kid! It's always a fun idea for kids, but an important principle in adulthood. We need to be mindful of where we step as we move forward in life, while remembering the past. Great Job!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016

Hi Matthew, thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...Goofy has always been one of my favorites...xxoo

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This poem made me smile. I love Goofy, so you had me at the picture. The words made me giggle and fitted the picture rather well in my opinion. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

HI DMT, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...and it made you smile...xxoo

Comment from laschomer

Excellent

I love how lighthearted this is. Simple sometimes works as it does here. Love the photo here too. I usu sally don't like poetry but this filled me with joy.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

Hi Laschomer, thank you so very much...I'm so glad you like it...xxoo

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Lump
on my head from that stump.
Grump!
I never considered writing one of these until just then. All things considered your eight-syllable verse is to prompt and excellent, in my opinion.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

HI LIJ, I am so glad you like it...thank you...

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

Wow - how fun - wonderful word choices. Thanks for sharing this fine piece. Cheers and the best to you my friend.

Warm regards,
Bill

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

Hi Bill, I am so glad you like it...xxoo

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

This is very well written and I love the picture.
That's Goofy for you. I'm always in awe at the talent it takes to write these small forms. I'm way too wordy.

Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day and God bless.
mik

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

HI Mike, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...

Comment from Writer51

Excellent

Very cute. I have seen people trip over stumps to include myself. It's a simple subject, but that's how our imaginations work.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

HI Writer, thank you so very much...xxoo