Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Exceptional

A wonderful and fulfilling chapter. Finally the lovebirds get together, a match made across the ages.

Pondria finally comes into his own, united by love and destiny.

Well developed love scene, very realistic and moving.

Complex and interesting plot, unique characters.

Rhonda

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Ah, my first six. Thanks to you, Rhonda. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. More to come.

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 24-Apr-2016

I have really enjoyed this series, but am usually out of sixes before I read it. I caught it early this time!

Rhonda

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Jay

= Okay, so I keep waiting for her to hex, or put a thumping on him.
= Something doesn't seem right. Maybe they will be caught together.
= This could end badly!

<> Lower case: She/she
= "Do--do you feel him here?" [S](s)he asked.

<> Lower case after ellipses: No/no
= "No ... [N](n)o. The General

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Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Thanks for reading and for the catch. I made the lower case change for the one following the ellipsis. The "She" I kept upper case, since it isn't a speaker tag. Unless you know something that negates that logic.

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 24-Apr-2016

No, it just read like a tag to me, so thought I'd mention it is all. (*<*)

Comment from candyfink

Excellent

I like your writing style as I did the last time I reviewed your other writing. You are certainly talented. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

THanks so much, for your generous rating and kind words.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Your well written fantasy is one that is easy and exciting to follow. I enjoy the well formed characters. Your writing and story pull the reader away from reality for a time.

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Glad to pull you away from reality, even for a while. Try to go back to reality for a visit now and then.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

It would appear that this saga is nearing an end. They are together and will seek victory in the same manner. This has very good imagery and descriptive scheme.

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Not quite the end. A couple of major twists. Stay tuned. Thanks for your kind words.