Comment from Irish Goat

Excellent

Nice triquatrain. Good internal rhyme on the alternating lines. Nice spiritual piece with solid imagery and description. Solid construction and flow. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015

Thank you for the kind comments and encouragement. I appreciate you taking the time to read and share your insights.

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

I did the counting and you nailed it. Good counting and not only that but it's a
wonderful poem as well. A very good message that many of us embrace.
Thank you for this quatrain, tri-rhyme poem. -Bill

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015

Hi Bill,
Thank you for the gracious review. I appreciate your analysis and insight. Debi

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I have not previously come across a Triquatrain. The internal rhyming of the first and third lines is most effective. As is so often the case, your poem draws upon your religious convictions for its strength. An excellent poem, much enjoyed!

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015

I am pleased you enjoyed the poem. I just recently came across this form when I saw it used by another FS poet and had to give it a try. Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your time and comments.

Comment from LanceHill

Excellent

This was beautifully written. It is such a great gift Christ has given us. His willingness to lay down His life for mine. Thanks for sharing. God bless.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015

Thank you for the excellent review and your insights on the topic. I appreciate it.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Very nicely done with this interesting poetry form. I will have to try this. Your words are uplifting and comforting. Presentation is beautiful. I enjoyed reading it. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015

Thank you, Marilyn. Yes, give it a try. It can be much longer, but I felt two quatrains was long enough for this one. I am pleased you enjoyed reading it. Debi

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful poem you have penned about the time Jesus will take us to be with him. It is so full of the truth and it was just beautiful. I love the art work. Angel heart does great work as well. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. hugs, Teri

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 Comment Written 09-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015

Thank you for the excellent review. Yes, Angelheart does some marvelous art. I am pleased you liked the poem. Thank you for stopping by to read and review.

Comment from snooker155

Excellent

PERFECT THE MESSAGE OF THIS POEM IS AS CLEAR AS IT NEEDS TO BE LIVE A GOOD LIFE HELPING OTHERS, REPENTING YOUR SINS AND GOD WILL REWARD YOU WITH A HOUSE IN HEAVEN WELL DONE FROM WILLIAM SNOOKER155X

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 Comment Written 09-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015

Thank you for the excellent review, William. I appreciate your insights on the topic. Debi