THE TRINING Book Three
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Fine Day For Zarbs' Unravelling "JOURNEY INTO REDEMPTION
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Comment from royowen
It's fascinating how Doctrex is bleeding, he says it's happened before, a lot of things in this episode I've not encountered before Jay, this is the best episode I've ever read, in an already impressive writing folio of yours. I don't think I've read how Doctrex came into his appointment as general in Kabeezan army, another shock, Axtilla voluntarily being married to Reuther Glnot, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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It's fascinating how Doctrex is bleeding, he says it's happened before, a lot of things in this episode I've not encountered before Jay, this is the best episode I've ever read, in an already impressive writing folio of yours. I don't think I've read how Doctrex came into his appointment as general in Kabeezan army, another shock, Axtilla voluntarily being married to Reuther Glnot, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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Oh, I am thrilled you find this chapter to be the best you've read. Doubly thrilled to see you think it's worthy of a six!
Bless you, Roy. Hope you had a delightful Easter.
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Well earned Jay, and you too, Roy
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
NOOOOoooooo, Jay....
You cannot do Doctrex in. He's such cuddly fella. You know what I mean? (*<*)
Awareness dissolving is NOT a good thing at all.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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NOOOOoooooo, Jay....
You cannot do Doctrex in. He's such cuddly fella. You know what I mean? (*<*)
Awareness dissolving is NOT a good thing at all.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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You're right I can't do away with Doctrex. I don't know about cuddly, but since the novel's in the first person it would kinda come to a screeching halt, doncha think? LOL, but no, it's not a good thing. Thanks for reading, Jax.
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Thx for the pump...(*<*)
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Awwwwww, I can't buy one! Well, that's not true. But if I expected one, It would have to be bought!
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I've got three chapters of a new western drafted. I needed to recharge my batteries. It will be quite the ride. (*<*)
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Bring it on, girl, bring it on!
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Thx....(*<*)
It's backup for when I finish these two. I hope to have another Rochelle up tomorrow afternoonish.
Comment from amahra
I really like reading this. I loved you command of language. First person writing is hard. You make it look so easy. Great chapter, Jay.
Wow, Zarb is a real pussy.
If Axtilla knew who, or what [no comma] these agents were[,] it was locked behind her beautiful lips.
His caterpillar brows were slanted down so closely together they could have been mating. [LOL]
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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I really like reading this. I loved you command of language. First person writing is hard. You make it look so easy. Great chapter, Jay.
Wow, Zarb is a real pussy.
If Axtilla knew who, or what [no comma] these agents were[,] it was locked behind her beautiful lips.
His caterpillar brows were slanted down so closely together they could have been mating. [LOL]
Comment Written 05-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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Zarbs a real pussy! I love it. Yes, it is not his best day. Ama, thank you so much for giving me my first 6 star review--on my first review. I hope you're a trend-setter.
