Stewartstein's Monsters
From 'neath the icy earth they wobbled...66 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Albeit horror - it's really entertaining -
so cleverly thought out and well presented -
keeping good rhythm and rhyme throughout...
all in all, most impressive and deserving
of a six.
good luck with the contest - surely a winner!!
Margaret
Albeit horror - it's really entertaining -
so cleverly thought out and well presented -
keeping good rhythm and rhyme throughout...
all in all, most impressive and deserving
of a six.
good luck with the contest - surely a winner!!
Margaret
Comment Written 08-Jan-2015
Comment from Alan K Pease
This the first of the Phyllis Stewart love fest that I have read. I too have a great feeling for her writing, but explore more on her novels. It must be awesome to concentrate on zombies and lift them into loving, creative persons. Thank you very much for this very entertaining poetic essay.
This the first of the Phyllis Stewart love fest that I have read. I too have a great feeling for her writing, but explore more on her novels. It must be awesome to concentrate on zombies and lift them into loving, creative persons. Thank you very much for this very entertaining poetic essay.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2015
Comment from thee-name
Excellent poem. Lines rhymed good to writing.
ON A ARTIC EXPEDITION TO FIND THE MONSTER FRANKENSTEIN
MY TEAM AND I FOUND SOMETHING WHICH NUMBED OUR COLLECTIVE MINDS,
Excellent poem. Lines rhymed good to writing.
ON A ARTIC EXPEDITION TO FIND THE MONSTER FRANKENSTEIN
MY TEAM AND I FOUND SOMETHING WHICH NUMBED OUR COLLECTIVE MINDS,
Comment Written 08-Jan-2015
Comment from mshirachot
Wow! It is going to be hard for any story to top this masterpiece, albeit a bit bloody and brutal. The whole presentation is put together well with the sickeningly gruesome photos.
Best wishes with this contest entry. I'd say you've got a real good shot at being the winning entry.
Blessings,
Marsha
Wow! It is going to be hard for any story to top this masterpiece, albeit a bit bloody and brutal. The whole presentation is put together well with the sickeningly gruesome photos.
Best wishes with this contest entry. I'd say you've got a real good shot at being the winning entry.
Blessings,
Marsha
Comment Written 08-Jan-2015
Comment from Domino 2
Excellent tribute to Phyllis and her penguin series, Deano.
Hilarious spooky way of turning her cuties into monsters unfit for children's' 'consumption'. ;-)
Great fun dialogue between you an the 'evil' Phyllis. LOL.
Original and inspired write, my friend.
Cheers, Ray
Excellent tribute to Phyllis and her penguin series, Deano.
Hilarious spooky way of turning her cuties into monsters unfit for children's' 'consumption'. ;-)
Great fun dialogue between you an the 'evil' Phyllis. LOL.
Original and inspired write, my friend.
Cheers, Ray
Comment Written 08-Jan-2015
Comment from Eric1
Hi (I know who you are) mystery author, well for goodness sake, there's only one person who could have written this fantastically gory tribute to Phillis's penguins, and very well written it is too, I too am a great admirer of her work so I appreciate the work that has gone into this wonderful poem, Good luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015
Hi (I know who you are) mystery author, well for goodness sake, there's only one person who could have written this fantastically gory tribute to Phillis's penguins, and very well written it is too, I too am a great admirer of her work so I appreciate the work that has gone into this wonderful poem, Good luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Eric, and based upon my reviews lately I think I'm gonna need that luck, LOL.
Much obliged!
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I don't think so my friend.
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I'm very glad to know you have that much confidence in me. ;)
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahahahaha! G'day Anon, LOL. You are cracked, warped, unstable, defective, insane and just fuckin' nutso. That's why Mr Anon i love your work so much. It seems another win here Sir...This is great. Cheers Fez (I'm going to turn Champer's pet Canary into a vampire, while she is at school)
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015
Hahahahahaha! G'day Anon, LOL. You are cracked, warped, unstable, defective, insane and just fuckin' nutso. That's why Mr Anon i love your work so much. It seems another win here Sir...This is great. Cheers Fez (I'm going to turn Champer's pet Canary into a vampire, while she is at school)
Comment Written 08-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015
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Hah, thanks, mate, and I'd really like to see that when you do. Just give me a shout, and I'll be there. Heh-heh-heh...
Much obliged! ;)
Comment from LIJ Red
I have a suspicion who did this post. No matter, it seems to be tailored to the prompt, and is grammatically well written, and full of imagery, so I think it rates five stars.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015
I have a suspicion who did this post. No matter, it seems to be tailored to the prompt, and is grammatically well written, and full of imagery, so I think it rates five stars.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015
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Thanks, LIJ Red. Much obliged.
Comment from G.B. Smith
OH MY GOODNESS, this is so classic and different. Once I started reading I was mesmerized.This is such a clever tale and for me gives new meanings and challenges to Happy Feet. Nicely crafted and played out
Bear
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015
OH MY GOODNESS, this is so classic and different. Once I started reading I was mesmerized.This is such a clever tale and for me gives new meanings and challenges to Happy Feet. Nicely crafted and played out
Bear
Comment Written 08-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015
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Thanks for your comments, Bear. Much appreciated. :)
Comment from GracieAnn
This story is gory but quite creative. I can't imagine Phyllis involving herself with horrors of this kind of encounter, though. Not in her nature. Be that as it may, it is definitely one of a kind. Solid rhyme. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015
This story is gory but quite creative. I can't imagine Phyllis involving herself with horrors of this kind of encounter, though. Not in her nature. Be that as it may, it is definitely one of a kind. Solid rhyme. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 08-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015
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Hah-ha, you're kiddin' me, right? Phyllis writes entire novels about demonic entities taking over human being minds, bodies and souls, and you think she's going to be averse to a little silly, comedic verse about zombie penguins? Uh-uh, I already know that ain't gonna' happen.
Thanks for your review, GracieAnn. :]
~Dean