Shepherd
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Not"poems inspired by Psalm 23
51 total reviews
Comment from Angel Debbie
Very strong spiritual write. Great word choice for the subject. God is proud that His Child can write like this! Great presentation with the new way of writing-Trinet.
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Very strong spiritual write. Great word choice for the subject. God is proud that His Child can write like this! Great presentation with the new way of writing-Trinet.
Comment Written 25-May-2014
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Oh, my goodness the six star rating is great, but it is your words that bring tears to my eyes. I do believe this is best review I have ever received. Maybe it's the "God is proud that His child..." statement. Thank you so much. You truly are an Angel Debbie. You have really made my day brighter with your touching comment. I appreciate it. Debi
Comment from JB Lynn
I think you got the format down. I didn't catch any errors, and applaud you for giving this a go, even though you missed the contest. I think the short lines really force the reader to pay attention to what is being said, and - as the writer - you have to be very selective about the words you chose. The portion about "blood not sweat" coming from the pores was visceral and moving. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-May-2014
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I think you got the format down. I didn't catch any errors, and applaud you for giving this a go, even though you missed the contest. I think the short lines really force the reader to pay attention to what is being said, and - as the writer - you have to be very selective about the words you chose. The portion about "blood not sweat" coming from the pores was visceral and moving. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-May-2014
reply by the author on 26-May-2014
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I appreciate the analysis and encouraging review. Thank you so much. Debi
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Debi - a strong spiritual work, great word choices to bring your faith into focus for me. A well penned poem and I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Dear Debi - a strong spiritual work, great word choices to bring your faith into focus for me. A well penned poem and I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 25-May-2014
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Thank you, Maureen.
I appreciate the gracious review and the encouraging comments about the writing. Thank you for always taking the time to read and comment.
Debi
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hi Debi,
This is a wonderful prayer of faith. And, wow, nice design with the Trinet and projection of thought. It read very well and portrayed your message letting go, and letting God. Nice work with this write...my best wishes, Bill
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Hi Debi,
This is a wonderful prayer of faith. And, wow, nice design with the Trinet and projection of thought. It read very well and portrayed your message letting go, and letting God. Nice work with this write...my best wishes, Bill
Comment Written 25-May-2014
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Thank you so much, Bill. You say such encouraging things. I appreciate the comments about the writing and the best wishes, too. Debi
Comment from Benny Beeharry
This such a beautiful writing ,so full of faith and sincerity.
At the moment when so many things are going awry in the world, we do need to cling to our faith.
I like the attempt of making a cross of the writing.
Very well done.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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This such a beautiful writing ,so full of faith and sincerity.
At the moment when so many things are going awry in the world, we do need to cling to our faith.
I like the attempt of making a cross of the writing.
Very well done.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 25-May-2014
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Thank you for the gracious remarks and encouragement. I appreciate it. Debi
Comment from kiwijenny
What a great poem..it is shaped like the cross. Directs us to the greatest Memorial Day there ever was...God sent His Son....redemption has begin un...on that cross...awesome poem it plumbs the depths ...the deepest need of man is met in this cross
God bless
reply by the author on 26-May-2014
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What a great poem..it is shaped like the cross. Directs us to the greatest Memorial Day there ever was...God sent His Son....redemption has begin un...on that cross...awesome poem it plumbs the depths ...the deepest need of man is met in this cross
God bless
Comment Written 25-May-2014
reply by the author on 26-May-2014
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Thank you for such a wonderful review and those shiny six stars. I am complimented that you liked it that much. I appreciate your insights too.God bless. Debi
Comment from mfowler
You've utilized this prompt's structure to perfection. Your scriptural interpretation of Christs's passion works really well as three crosses, reprising the image of Calvary. You've been faithful to the message. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-May-2014
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You've utilized this prompt's structure to perfection. Your scriptural interpretation of Christs's passion works really well as three crosses, reprising the image of Calvary. You've been faithful to the message. Well done.
Comment Written 25-May-2014
reply by the author on 26-May-2014
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Thank you for kind comments and encouraging review. I appreciate it. Debi
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
Stunning artwork! And with the formatting you've chosen, it really is beautiful all the way around.
The message id precise and thought provoking. Well done.
Cheers,
Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 26-May-2014
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Hi,
Stunning artwork! And with the formatting you've chosen, it really is beautiful all the way around.
The message id precise and thought provoking. Well done.
Cheers,
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 25-May-2014
reply by the author on 26-May-2014
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Thank you for such an excellent and encouraging review, Jax. I appreciate it. Debi
Comment from akulkumol
Sorry to know that you missed the contest. It's beautiful spiritual poem, the trinet designed amazingly like three numbers cross. Really felt happy reading your poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-May-2014
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Sorry to know that you missed the contest. It's beautiful spiritual poem, the trinet designed amazingly like three numbers cross. Really felt happy reading your poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-May-2014
reply by the author on 26-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I am happy you like it. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi
Comment from Ewen2607
Fabulous poem.
I like the structure and picture, though I think the rhyme was not very flowing.
Good choice of old language and a capturing title.
Ewen
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reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Fabulous poem.
I like the structure and picture, though I think the rhyme was not very flowing.
Good choice of old language and a capturing title.
Ewen
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-May-2014
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Thanks for the review. Sorry it was not to your liking. This form does not require rhyming and I only chose to rhyme the lines with six words. Have a great day and thanks for stopping by.