All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "No Sound"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from wordsareus
I wish I could give you my spot. This is a fantastic entry. Not only does it have visual appeal but it is very well expressed and would have been a strong contender in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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I wish I could give you my spot. This is a fantastic entry. Not only does it have visual appeal but it is very well expressed and would have been a strong contender in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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oh well - that'll teach me to be tired last thing before I turn of Fanstory, hmm? Bless you for your good wishes and I'll look forward to reading yours! :))Sharyn
Comment from Taffspride
A beautiful presentation of this Katie2.
I love the lines
Star shards
Spiral
round.
What a vivid picture you have painted.
Thanks for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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A beautiful presentation of this Katie2.
I love the lines
Star shards
Spiral
round.
What a vivid picture you have painted.
Thanks for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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bless you Ann! :)Sharyn
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hey Sharyn,
What a fabulous presentation. With your carefully chosen words, this reader is left to ponder the mysteries of the universe. I particularly love your alliteration with 'star shards spiral.' Nice work!
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Hey Sharyn,
What a fabulous presentation. With your carefully chosen words, this reader is left to ponder the mysteries of the universe. I particularly love your alliteration with 'star shards spiral.' Nice work!
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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and hugs right back to you Lou! thank you so much! :)Sharyn
Comment from robina1978
You did this very well, especially with the structure as that is not easy. I loved the subject about the moon and the stars, earth is sleeping. Best wishes for the challenge. I will have a difficult choice to make.
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You did this very well, especially with the structure as that is not easy. I loved the subject about the moon and the stars, earth is sleeping. Best wishes for the challenge. I will have a difficult choice to make.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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unfortunately I missed the competition, Ine .. oh well ... next time! :)S
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Welcome, what a shame, Ine
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Another interesting write in the katie21 form that has just appeared recently, or that I have noticed. Short verse with short and to the point message
that is presented in a delightful manner, as the moon peeks through the black night. Thank you for sharing. Robin :)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Another interesting write in the katie21 form that has just appeared recently, or that I have noticed. Short verse with short and to the point message
that is presented in a delightful manner, as the moon peeks through the black night. Thank you for sharing. Robin :)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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thx so much Robin! :)S
Comment from Pili Pubul
Oh those golden moons against black sky, you penned this poem with beauty and sensitivity. Love every word you chose.
Thank you so much for sharing, enjoyed reading it and ponder. Pili
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Oh those golden moons against black sky, you penned this poem with beauty and sensitivity. Love every word you chose.
Thank you so much for sharing, enjoyed reading it and ponder. Pili
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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thank you Pili! :))
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You most welcome. Hugs . Pili
Comment from cvcopac
I'm looking at a lovely creation, great picture, some good word choices and an attractive and easy reading format. "Why" brings us to connect with "God." You must have missed a contest. Kenny
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I'm looking at a lovely creation, great picture, some good word choices and an attractive and easy reading format. "Why" brings us to connect with "God." You must have missed a contest. Kenny
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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I did indeed miss the contest - duh - didn't realize it would be so popular! But I had to do one anyway - thx Kenny! :)S
Comment from J. Dark
Love this one, Sharyn, it is joyfully perfect from the interesting formatting and perfect alliteration to the fab picture! Indie also read me your hysterical poem about aging too on the drive down. Hope the site will let me six that one also when I catch up with reviewing. We were crying with laughter!!
Going shopping now and hoping to meet up with the delightful Gazzagodbod before we leave.
Well done with this awesome write. It was subtly beautiful.
Lots of Devonshire love,
Julie :-)
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Love this one, Sharyn, it is joyfully perfect from the interesting formatting and perfect alliteration to the fab picture! Indie also read me your hysterical poem about aging too on the drive down. Hope the site will let me six that one also when I catch up with reviewing. We were crying with laughter!!
Going shopping now and hoping to meet up with the delightful Gazzagodbod before we leave.
Well done with this awesome write. It was subtly beautiful.
Lots of Devonshire love,
Julie :-)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Bless you for your lovely six on this one Julie - and glad you enjoyed my old bag one, too - I'm sure Indie would have given it a very spirited rendition! Hug Gazza for me too!
:)Sharyn
Comment from Nebukadneser
you are so brilliant with your writing, me girl.
I am impressed with the way you arrange your words. This is yet another brilliant effort from your pen
Every line contains the wow factor
Well done
you're a star
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
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you are so brilliant with your writing, me girl.
I am impressed with the way you arrange your words. This is yet another brilliant effort from your pen
Every line contains the wow factor
Well done
you're a star
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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bless you Neb! :)Sharyn
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written with beautiful imagery holding the poem together plus beautiful presentation I enjoyed regards Jill
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Yes this is well written with beautiful imagery holding the poem together plus beautiful presentation I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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thx so much Jill! :)S