Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "part two, Chapter 19"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from rtobaygo
SHORT CHAPTER BUT RIVETING. YOUR NARRATIVE OF THE ACTION WAS EXCELLENT, SAND THE WORRY, DOUBTS AND FEARS OF THE LIVING OVER THE INJURIES INCURRED BY ANNA, IS AN EXCELLENT HOOK TO FOCUS THE READERS ATTENTION ON THE FORTHCOMING CHAPTER. KUDOS!
TAKE CARE,
RAY
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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SHORT CHAPTER BUT RIVETING. YOUR NARRATIVE OF THE ACTION WAS EXCELLENT, SAND THE WORRY, DOUBTS AND FEARS OF THE LIVING OVER THE INJURIES INCURRED BY ANNA, IS AN EXCELLENT HOOK TO FOCUS THE READERS ATTENTION ON THE FORTHCOMING CHAPTER. KUDOS!
TAKE CARE,
RAY
Comment Written 23-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND REVIEW AND YOUR ENCOURAGING WORDS.
Comment from JW
This is a good addition to your story. However, I was a bit puzzled by the doctor's use of a pager. Do doctor's still use pagers these days, instead of smart phones?
Either way, good job. One cannot help but wonder what's next. JW
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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This is a good addition to your story. However, I was a bit puzzled by the doctor's use of a pager. Do doctor's still use pagers these days, instead of smart phones?
Either way, good job. One cannot help but wonder what's next. JW
Comment Written 23-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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My oncologist still uses a pager. Maybe he's old fashioned. Thank you for the kind review,
Comment from bookishfabler
Wow, you did a great job. I didn't see any nits this time and evil Eddie didn't pop in either.
At first I was reading and thought I read it before, which I did. But then I saw you were just leaving off for effect. Nice job again
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Wow, you did a great job. I didn't see any nits this time and evil Eddie didn't pop in either.
At first I was reading and thought I read it before, which I did. But then I saw you were just leaving off for effect. Nice job again
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 23-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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you're welcome
Comment from Allison78
I think this is another great chapter and you have kept the momentum going really well. You leave me each week not wanting to wait for the next one. Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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I think this is another great chapter and you have kept the momentum going really well. You leave me each week not wanting to wait for the next one. Well done!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from squid152
I am just joining the story. But what I can tell you is the way that you write, appears to the reader, like it is happening now.-Squid
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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I am just joining the story. But what I can tell you is the way that you write, appears to the reader, like it is happening now.-Squid
Comment Written 23-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Well Barbara
Anna suffered a terrible amount of abuse at the bastards hands. It is a good thing a bullet to the head, it saves the county and state a ton of money to house, feed, and educate him. Bobby is dead. Let's hear it for DEAD!!!
Bear
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Well Barbara
Anna suffered a terrible amount of abuse at the bastards hands. It is a good thing a bullet to the head, it saves the county and state a ton of money to house, feed, and educate him. Bobby is dead. Let's hear it for DEAD!!!
Bear
Comment Written 23-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Cobalt Blue
I think this is the third installment I have read now so I am starting to pick up on the story line. It is making for a good read. The character development is very interesting. You write well, carrying the story forward at a good pace. No spags seen at all. Good writing!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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I think this is the third installment I have read now so I am starting to pick up on the story line. It is making for a good read. The character development is very interesting. You write well, carrying the story forward at a good pace. No spags seen at all. Good writing!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Chris Tee
Wow! At last that pig Bobby is taken out and I love this Idea. He should have died long ago. Barbara this was an absolutely magic part chapter. Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Wow! At last that pig Bobby is taken out and I love this Idea. He should have died long ago. Barbara this was an absolutely magic part chapter. Well done!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
It is absolutely horrifying when everything within your
soul is screaming that something bad is going to happen
and there's not a darn thing you can do about it. As a
school administrator, I've seen the train wreck coming
but because no one had broken any laws yet, nothing could
be done
thank you for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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barbara:
It is absolutely horrifying when everything within your
soul is screaming that something bad is going to happen
and there's not a darn thing you can do about it. As a
school administrator, I've seen the train wreck coming
but because no one had broken any laws yet, nothing could
be done
thank you for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 22-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tonulak
The medical trauma assessment in this chapter was a chilling testimony of the extent of the abuse and how quickly and how devistating it can all happen. told with grisk pace and thorough realism. Powerful write.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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The medical trauma assessment in this chapter was a chilling testimony of the extent of the abuse and how quickly and how devistating it can all happen. told with grisk pace and thorough realism. Powerful write.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.