Little Billy
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "The Devils Seed"memiors from my life experiences.
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Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi keimosobie,
Interesting theme and very well put across, the message of temptation and our stumbling toward it. All to easily we fall from grace...
Patrick
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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Hi keimosobie,
Interesting theme and very well put across, the message of temptation and our stumbling toward it. All to easily we fall from grace...
Patrick
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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thank you for the kind review and the stars.
Comment from Dklrdmcches
This was very well done. I enjoyed the flow very much, thought it suited your style very well. Great contemplation was found throughout. I enjoyed this piece very much...DKLRD
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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This was very well done. I enjoyed the flow very much, thought it suited your style very well. Great contemplation was found throughout. I enjoyed this piece very much...DKLRD
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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thank you for the kind review and the stars.
Comment from Lani2
The Devils seed planted, tells this story very well. We have all been tempted at one time or another, and have fallen to our temptations. The Devil knows exactly when we are most vulnerable. We need just one gift from God to ward him off. It is called strength. Good writing. This certainly deserves a six. Lani2
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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The Devils seed planted, tells this story very well. We have all been tempted at one time or another, and have fallen to our temptations. The Devil knows exactly when we are most vulnerable. We need just one gift from God to ward him off. It is called strength. Good writing. This certainly deserves a six. Lani2
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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thank you for the kind review and the stars.
Comment from Bellringer
You provide us with a powerful image of the soul who has given in to overwhelming temptation. The imagination (impregnated by the "devil's seed") starts the fire and we push away all that we know about good and fall into the "fire." Excellent. Best wishes, Hector
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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You provide us with a powerful image of the soul who has given in to overwhelming temptation. The imagination (impregnated by the "devil's seed") starts the fire and we push away all that we know about good and fall into the "fire." Excellent. Best wishes, Hector
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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thank you for the kind review and the stars.
Comment from adewpearl
combust, forsaken, hopeless abandonment, lust, spawn - great word choices that create and sustain the brooding tone of this poetic cautionary tale - this poem packs quite a punch! Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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combust, forsaken, hopeless abandonment, lust, spawn - great word choices that create and sustain the brooding tone of this poetic cautionary tale - this poem packs quite a punch! Brooke :-)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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thank you for the kind review and the stars. Means alot coming from you.
Comment from countess gram
This is a very well written poem.The flow is smooth and the structure is good. Your descriptions are great and the emotion is solid. Well done and keep writing!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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This is a very well written poem.The flow is smooth and the structure is good. Your descriptions are great and the emotion is solid. Well done and keep writing!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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thank you for the kind review and the stars.
Comment from FredCollingwood
I agree with you. Everyone has given in to temptation ... likely often. Just last night when the waitress came by with the desert tray, I was a gonner.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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I agree with you. Everyone has given in to temptation ... likely often. Just last night when the waitress came by with the desert tray, I was a gonner.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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thank you for the kind review and the stars.
Comment from christopherjl
Well done and thank you for sharing. I have no comments for improvement so instead I'll just say "well done" and "continue writing" Regards, Christopher.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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Well done and thank you for sharing. I have no comments for improvement so instead I'll just say "well done" and "continue writing" Regards, Christopher.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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thank you
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hello keimosobie,
Your "Devil's Seed" poem was an interesting and well written poem. It was also thought provoking and in good form with a nice, easy flow and your couplets had strong end rhymes.
Best wishes,
W ^-^
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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Hello keimosobie,
Your "Devil's Seed" poem was an interesting and well written poem. It was also thought provoking and in good form with a nice, easy flow and your couplets had strong end rhymes.
Best wishes,
W ^-^
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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thank you
Comment from Connie P
This is absolutely exceptional. Pain often sends us searching for relief ... a distraction, a few moments, or hours of reprieve, someone or something to make us feel whole (or just better, wanted, needed). MANY have succumbed to 'pain relief' in the form of seduction. Very well done!
Connie
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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This is absolutely exceptional. Pain often sends us searching for relief ... a distraction, a few moments, or hours of reprieve, someone or something to make us feel whole (or just better, wanted, needed). MANY have succumbed to 'pain relief' in the form of seduction. Very well done!
Connie
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2010
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thank you connie for your excellent review and your kind review and the six stars.