Little Billy
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Cop"memiors from my life experiences.
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Comment from jmyron
True of the majority of cops. Glad that your brother is one of the elite. I don't know the criteria for a clarity pyramid, so I can't comment on form, but I did enjoy your poem
John
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True of the majority of cops. Glad that your brother is one of the elite. I don't know the criteria for a clarity pyramid, so I can't comment on form, but I did enjoy your poem
John
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you
Comment from misscookie
This is a very up lifting poem for policeman. They put their are our solders Fighting a every day war. Protecting us from the gang banger, robbers, rapes and worst. Some even lose their lives over stupid things. God bless those who truly believe in justice and God help those who don't. This is a good write.
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This is a very up lifting poem for policeman. They put their are our solders Fighting a every day war. Protecting us from the gang banger, robbers, rapes and worst. Some even lose their lives over stupid things. God bless those who truly believe in justice and God help those who don't. This is a good write.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you
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you're wlcome, take care.
Comment from dave d yes its me
good poem thats all true but ive had dealings of cops that werent like you. dont get me wrong i dint judge everyone thae same. but not all cops are good ones an they give you a bad name.
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good poem thats all true but ive had dealings of cops that werent like you. dont get me wrong i dint judge everyone thae same. but not all cops are good ones an they give you a bad name.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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thank you
Comment from rama devi
Superb tribute to cops and your brother.
An excellent clarity pyramid! Apt word choices and strong closing line--very impacting.
I love this line too-
Gilded by acts of Love
Bravo. best of luck.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Superb tribute to cops and your brother.
An excellent clarity pyramid! Apt word choices and strong closing line--very impacting.
I love this line too-
Gilded by acts of Love
Bravo. best of luck.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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thanks
Comment from Blinkyd
it's good to see poems recognizing our societies protectors. I know that sometimes cops can't show emotions while on the job, but it's good to know that some do still have them. Excellent job.
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it's good to see poems recognizing our societies protectors. I know that sometimes cops can't show emotions while on the job, but it's good to know that some do still have them. Excellent job.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem
Comment from anabellapongasi
A nice little poem in good clarity-pyramid form, that pays tribute to a well-loved cop who does his duty well. Good job on this. Good luck in the contest!
Anabella
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A nice little poem in good clarity-pyramid form, that pays tribute to a well-loved cop who does his duty well. Good job on this. Good luck in the contest!
Anabella
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem
Comment from irsajay
Very nice poem, which salutes the cop with such vivid words that today, you won my thumbs up. It has a very nice form and read great from top to the last line.
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Very nice poem, which salutes the cop with such vivid words that today, you won my thumbs up. It has a very nice form and read great from top to the last line.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem
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You're most welcome.
Comment from Fireshadow
This is an excellent entry for the Write a Clarity Pyramid contest. You certainly followed the prescribed format to present a great message about those who put their own lives on the line to protect and serve others. Good luck in the contest ! Amarillys
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This is an excellent entry for the Write a Clarity Pyramid contest. You certainly followed the prescribed format to present a great message about those who put their own lives on the line to protect and serve others. Good luck in the contest ! Amarillys
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem
Comment from humpwhistle
An unusual topic for a poem, therefore quite compelling. It may not be my place, but I suggest you lose the s on informs. It seems to me that single change makes that line more immediate, more personal. Just a thought.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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An unusual topic for a poem, therefore quite compelling. It may not be my place, but I suggest you lose the s on informs. It seems to me that single change makes that line more immediate, more personal. Just a thought.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem
Comment from Valkarie
This is a very iconic piece of writing which is most prolific and inspiring. It says so much in such short words, which flow so powerfully and concise across to the reader. The complexity of this piece is in the powerful imagery it projects, making it an enigmatic piece of poetry. Also a very well written and creative one also.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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This is a very iconic piece of writing which is most prolific and inspiring. It says so much in such short words, which flow so powerfully and concise across to the reader. The complexity of this piece is in the powerful imagery it projects, making it an enigmatic piece of poetry. Also a very well written and creative one also.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.