CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Winslow
Dear sixteen,
Very good up beat poem with a message too. The flow is excellent and the rhyming also.
Warm regards,
Winslow
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Dear sixteen,
Very good up beat poem with a message too. The flow is excellent and the rhyming also.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards
Wonderful statement that is only limited to what our mind can contemplate on. Speaks to me as Christ being the only bridge from darkness to light. Anyway, it is a profound piece!
Dave
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Wonderful statement that is only limited to what our mind can contemplate on. Speaks to me as Christ being the only bridge from darkness to light. Anyway, it is a profound piece!
Dave
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Oh, Sixteezkid, I believe
the essence of life, you do conceive
for no matter what will be our loss
hope is always the bridge to cross
to get us to the other side
where faith, love and safety hide
hold onto hope with all your might
and you shall sleep well every night
good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
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Oh, Sixteezkid, I believe
the essence of life, you do conceive
for no matter what will be our loss
hope is always the bridge to cross
to get us to the other side
where faith, love and safety hide
hold onto hope with all your might
and you shall sleep well every night
good luck in the contest
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
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Oh my! A poem for a review! How wonderful!! And so beautiful! Thank you SO much for that! I'm going to cut and paste it to save for always. Fondly, Sue
Comment from nora arjuna
Hi Sue, another fine entry to a contest, and a great two lines for this Essense form. Thought you were not much inspired? lol. Enjoyed the read and wish you well with this.
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Hi Sue, another fine entry to a contest, and a great two lines for this Essense form. Thought you were not much inspired? lol. Enjoyed the read and wish you well with this.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This is something most can relate to whether they've already crossed the bridge or haven't found it yet. Good luck in the contest
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This is something most can relate to whether they've already crossed the bridge or haven't found it yet. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from tammipratt
Very interesting and unusual - I really enjoyed this. A very powerful message. I think the artwork is fabulous for this piece. All the best in the contest.
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Very interesting and unusual - I really enjoyed this. A very powerful message. I think the artwork is fabulous for this piece. All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from joan marie
I just lost an Aunt. This is a perfect read for me. What a great way of thinking of the grieving process. May not be exactly what you meant, but it works. joan marie
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I just lost an Aunt. This is a perfect read for me. What a great way of thinking of the grieving process. May not be exactly what you meant, but it works. joan marie
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from glacierbabe
This was very interesting and showed hope as well as telling. The bridge, it could be time or anything the person suffering needs it to be. It is that something that they can hold on to in their time of need to get through or over the pain. Very well done. Cheryl :)
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This was very interesting and showed hope as well as telling. The bridge, it could be time or anything the person suffering needs it to be. It is that something that they can hold on to in their time of need to get through or over the pain. Very well done. Cheryl :)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ...
This is both wise and clever ... and you say in this short work, in full conformity with the requirements for this Contest, makes so much sense.
I certainly wish you well in the Contest.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Sixteezkid ...
This is both wise and clever ... and you say in this short work, in full conformity with the requirements for this Contest, makes so much sense.
I certainly wish you well in the Contest.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Hitcher
More than enough words for someone as creative as your self to get there message out and manage to get the internal rhyme working well, Very nice, good luck Sue.
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More than enough words for someone as creative as your self to get there message out and manage to get the internal rhyme working well, Very nice, good luck Sue.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009