CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from BethShelby
What a neat pyramid poem. You have described fate well.
I really love your last line: "Life's proof that nothing is assured"
How very true. Good luck with the writing prompt contest.
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What a neat pyramid poem. You have described fate well.
I really love your last line: "Life's proof that nothing is assured"
How very true. Good luck with the writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from ~Dovey
This was my pleasure to read and review. I especially enjoyed the use of "perchance" and "happenstance". I might have chosen different artwork if it was left up to me, but what you have works. :) I wish you the best of luck in the contest. This entry should do well.
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This was my pleasure to read and review. I especially enjoyed the use of "perchance" and "happenstance". I might have chosen different artwork if it was left up to me, but what you have works. :) I wish you the best of luck in the contest. This entry should do well.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from KelinaJ
Interesting image selection. Good presentation and color scheme. You hit the style requirements nicely. Great Job.
Good luck in the contest.
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Interesting image selection. Good presentation and color scheme. You hit the style requirements nicely. Great Job.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from Dklrdmcches
This was very well written. great meaning was envoked throughout this cleverly pieced together poem. great job with weaving simple words into a powerful piece...DKLRD
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This was very well written. great meaning was envoked throughout this cleverly pieced together poem. great job with weaving simple words into a powerful piece...DKLRD
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from FredCollingwood
How are you learning all of these. If anything you are a quick learner, because they're all so good. I'm really impressed.
Fred
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How are you learning all of these. If anything you are a quick learner, because they're all so good. I'm really impressed.
Fred
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from Carol D Parker
This is briliant. You sure told it like it is. You use such powerful words. And you followed the rules. I love it. Great job. It says so much.
Delora
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This is briliant. You sure told it like it is. You use such powerful words. And you followed the rules. I love it. Great job. It says so much.
Delora
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from adewpearl
I've always loved the words perchance and happenstance, and they work so well together here in your well-constructed clarity pyramid. I still must try to write one of these. I love the repeated P sounds in the center section. Life's proof that nothing is assured sums it all up quite well - this is a most thoughtful poem, Sue. Brooke
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I've always loved the words perchance and happenstance, and they work so well together here in your well-constructed clarity pyramid. I still must try to write one of these. I love the repeated P sounds in the center section. Life's proof that nothing is assured sums it all up quite well - this is a most thoughtful poem, Sue. Brooke
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from Judian James
I love an intelligent piece. This is one of my least favorite forms, but with that being said, you nailed this Sue. well done!
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I love an intelligent piece. This is one of my least favorite forms, but with that being said, you nailed this Sue. well done!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from womanwriter
Your poetry and it's many forms are a wonderful way to learn more about this art form.
Thank you for being such a willing teacher.
This poem is very well structured and every word is a perfect choice.
Bravo!
Warmest regards,
womanwriter
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Your poetry and it's many forms are a wonderful way to learn more about this art form.
Thank you for being such a willing teacher.
This poem is very well structured and every word is a perfect choice.
Bravo!
Warmest regards,
womanwriter
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from Joan E.
You have created a remarkable and perfect clarity pyramid both in shape and content, and you included a profound message at the same time. I enjoyed your use of alliteration as well.
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You have created a remarkable and perfect clarity pyramid both in shape and content, and you included a profound message at the same time. I enjoyed your use of alliteration as well.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009