CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Dklrdmcches
I loved this science lesson. this was done with such fun and grace that the reader was left to imagine themselves basking in the sun. great job...DKLRD
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I loved this science lesson. this was done with such fun and grace that the reader was left to imagine themselves basking in the sun. great job...DKLRD
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from c_lucas
A well written fun poem celebrating the coming of Spring and warmer weather. It has a smooth flow of words making for a very easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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A well written fun poem celebrating the coming of Spring and warmer weather. It has a smooth flow of words making for a very easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from brooklynauthor
What a fun way to see spring and receive a science lesson. ;) Great job. I read this three times looking for a word repeat or anything I didn't like... because I haven't found anything yet that I haven't liked in your poetry... but, I didn't. You have a way with words.
Jerry
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What a fun way to see spring and receive a science lesson. ;) Great job. I read this three times looking for a word repeat or anything I didn't like... because I haven't found anything yet that I haven't liked in your poetry... but, I didn't. You have a way with words.
Jerry
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from WRITER1
Thank god for spring, I don;t know a single person who isn't waiting for spring. You did a good job on this piece. It was an uplift read.
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Thank god for spring, I don;t know a single person who isn't waiting for spring. You did a good job on this piece. It was an uplift read.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from bard owl
What an inspiring poem you have penned. That our planet survives and thrives in its place in space is truly a miracle. And the smaller mircles of live are not unlike that, just on smaller scale. Excellent and delightful read, Sue. Blessings to you, Linda
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What an inspiring poem you have penned. That our planet survives and thrives in its place in space is truly a miracle. And the smaller mircles of live are not unlike that, just on smaller scale. Excellent and delightful read, Sue. Blessings to you, Linda
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from howling harp
i loved the idea that all began because we are on tilt! the meter was a bit long for me in places and i felt that made it difficult to get flowing for me. i suspect written only for fun so i am not going to ry to say where i would change unless you want me too. i still love the tilt!! cheers harp
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i loved the idea that all began because we are on tilt! the meter was a bit long for me in places and i felt that made it difficult to get flowing for me. i suspect written only for fun so i am not going to ry to say where i would change unless you want me too. i still love the tilt!! cheers harp
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from mushroom
yes a very well thought out and written poem, i liked the way you include facts within the content and i found this very enjoyable
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yes a very well thought out and written poem, i liked the way you include facts within the content and i found this very enjoyable
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from earthlybeing
Oh I can't wait until we can bask in the sun. Love the poem. Well written and easy to read and understand. Enjoyed it very much. Thanks, Jeanette
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Oh I can't wait until we can bask in the sun. Love the poem. Well written and easy to read and understand. Enjoyed it very much. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from grassroots08
Oh stop it right now. You were too giving us a science lesson. My daughter just brought home a test and got a 100 on it. It was about the moon, the planet and all the stars. LOL Great lob here. cheers, Don
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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Oh stop it right now. You were too giving us a science lesson. My daughter just brought home a test and got a 100 on it. It was about the moon, the planet and all the stars. LOL Great lob here. cheers, Don
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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LOL!!! Was NOT!!!! It started out as a "teaser" as a serious poem, then "gotcha". HA! Awesome that your daughter ACED the test! A great feeling to know your children are curious and studious. Thanks so much for your very kind (and cheeky) review. Ha! Sue
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Do you sort of cringe when my reviews first start to surface? I would. LOL
Hugs for writer friend.
Don here!
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I couldn't have put it more succinctly or more perfectly.
(tee-hee!)
Comment from BethShelby
This a lively little poem. It is interesting that our seasons come about as the result of tilt but as you say you're waiting for Spring and so am I. I am ready for the winter season to end. It like your rhyme and flow.
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This a lively little poem. It is interesting that our seasons come about as the result of tilt but as you say you're waiting for Spring and so am I. I am ready for the winter season to end. It like your rhyme and flow.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009