CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Signaler
HI Sixteezkid, I have to admit this is way above my head, but I know what I like when I see it. Can't see anything that would need to be changed.
Angels, Signaler
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HI Sixteezkid, I have to admit this is way above my head, but I know what I like when I see it. Can't see anything that would need to be changed.
Angels, Signaler
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from findingmyroom
Thank you for the lesson on Fibonacci. (I vaguely remembered the name from math class.) Your poem, interestingly, is almost pyramidal in shape, while the subject is circular: the basic needs we are born with still exist we we cease to. My favorite line is "Yearning for Fulfillment" which is an astute way of putting all our needs into a single word.
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Thank you for the lesson on Fibonacci. (I vaguely remembered the name from math class.) Your poem, interestingly, is almost pyramidal in shape, while the subject is circular: the basic needs we are born with still exist we we cease to. My favorite line is "Yearning for Fulfillment" which is an astute way of putting all our needs into a single word.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ...
The words that you have used in this short work are good and make a clear statement. The format you have chosen, all worked out mathematically, is most unusual and I enjoyed reading what you have written.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Sixteezkid ...
The words that you have used in this short work are good and make a clear statement. The format you have chosen, all worked out mathematically, is most unusual and I enjoyed reading what you have written.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from Cedar
Short, sweet and to the point. You have summed up our lives with just a handful of words. Some poems takes 20 to 30 lines to say what you have said with just a few.
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Short, sweet and to the point. You have summed up our lives with just a handful of words. Some poems takes 20 to 30 lines to say what you have said with just a few.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from Carol D Parker
This is majestic. The truth in a very creative form. I love the way you put this together. You're very talented. Keep writing.
Delora
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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This is majestic. The truth in a very creative form. I love the way you put this together. You're very talented. Keep writing.
Delora
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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deloralock, your compliments are so encouraging. I've fallen head over heels in love with poetry (believe it or not I couldn't have cared LESS for it my entire life until just a few months ago). Go figure! Love to keep learning. Thanks for your awesome review. So happy you enjoyed this piece. Sue :-))
Comment from NightWriter
"Our Common Thread" is another beautifully written poem, this one being Fibonacci. This is an interesting one to read, as it is perfect in syllables and another one where I learned something new. I didn't know about the golden ratio or that it was used in the Renaissance in paintings.
Bravo! And thank you for writing this. :)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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"Our Common Thread" is another beautifully written poem, this one being Fibonacci. This is an interesting one to read, as it is perfect in syllables and another one where I learned something new. I didn't know about the golden ratio or that it was used in the Renaissance in paintings.
Bravo! And thank you for writing this. :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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NightWriter, isn't it wonderful to learn of new little tidbits. I couldn't live without curiosity about so many things from the mundane to the profound. Poetry is a new-found love and will never look back. Thank you for your awesome review. So glad you enjoyed the notes. With warm regards, Sue
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It is! Thanks so much. :)
Steve
Comment from RADIO
So much wisdom packed into
a small poem of few words
but in this you create a gem
of truth throuhout the circle
of life. Well done, once again.
Radio
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So much wisdom packed into
a small poem of few words
but in this you create a gem
of truth throuhout the circle
of life. Well done, once again.
Radio
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from sara-beth
Hmm,....that is very true! We all have basic needs that we try to fulfill, and that is life. Interesting way to express that, and the title fits perfectly. Great job!
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Hmm,....that is very true! We all have basic needs that we try to fulfill, and that is life. Interesting way to express that, and the title fits perfectly. Great job!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from chaswriter
Sue - I didn't you are mathematician. I thought Fibonacci Poems were for science fiction related subjects but I found a site that has a lot more. Well done. I enjoyed it. Charlie
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Sue - I didn't you are mathematician. I thought Fibonacci Poems were for science fiction related subjects but I found a site that has a lot more. Well done. I enjoyed it. Charlie
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A short and sweet piece
of verse, but the words
say it all and are so true.
Unusual piece of artwork.
I certainly wouldn't inspire
any poetry in me.
Margaret.
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A short and sweet piece
of verse, but the words
say it all and are so true.
Unusual piece of artwork.
I certainly wouldn't inspire
any poetry in me.
Margaret.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009