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CSP: A Collection of Poems

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A collection of poetry

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Comment from Just2Write
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The passion of love, that melts into lust... or is it the passion of lust, that melts into love. You are right - no matter. Romance is so well represented in your poem. Great entry. Rose.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
    Rose, very well put! It is great the way chemistry works, though. Thank you for your very generous review and compliments. Sue
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Sixteezkid
Good entry to think about looks like it doesn't make any difference to some. . But give me love which I desire to fill me with desire.

Good entry
Gert

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
    That's what we're really searching for is a great love. Nothing like it. Thank you very much for your very kind review. With regards, Sue
Comment from malachi1206
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Very good piece you fit the requirements and made quite a statement to boot I thought the content excellent by itself malachi1206

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
    malachi, thank you very much for your very kind compliments and review. Much appreciated, Sue
Comment from dportwood
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Lust = Love? Must be the animal in all of us. Desire is the ruling emotion. Short poems like this tetractys can tell a real story. Well said.

Duane

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
    Our chemistry works in mysterious ways. Yes, desire is the ruling emotion...for love, intimacy, human contact and commonality. Hey, that's longer than my poem! HA! Glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for your very kind review. Sue
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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This poem has so much feel flowing through the strong work it is very good contest entry that I enjoyed well done regards Fuller

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
    Fuller, so glad you enjoyed this. And thanks for your very kind compliments and review. With regards, Sue
Comment from rmdelta
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Sue,

this is a great contest entry, my friend. You've told such a strong story in so very few words. I don't know how the teracydals are supposed to work, but I think this is good.

Reggie

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
    Another one of those weird poems you don't like and you LIKED this one! YAY!! Now, that says a lot! :-)) Thanks so much for your great compliments, Reggie. Sue
Comment from grassroots08
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By the picture, I would say it makes no difference who seems in control of the situation, either. Well penned, and the thought it was honestly told. Get these two a room or motel, will ya! LOL Cheers, Don

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
    HA!! They're both OUT of control! And already got a room! HA!!! Thanks for your very kind and FUN review, Don....Sue :-))
Comment from PUPA
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Well, love is the first stage that should lead to lust (no, I correct that, not always!) I mean when it is love then this is the beautiful ending, making love.
Well expressed, lovely picture.
Good luck.
Pupa

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
    Love is always the ultimate, isn't it? Thank you very much for your very kind review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Koba
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Very well done!And exactly the truth, in the moment it doesn't make any difference whether it is love or lust. But the best of all is love with lust! Good poem! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
    Yes love WITH lust is grand! Thanks so much for your very generous review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from honeytree
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Attraction then love and marriage quickly can happen. The word attraction is important here and love and marriage not long after. Their is a lot of insecurity within our world and being married helps to pay the bills, particularly when two are working.

Great writing.

Honeytree.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009