Comment from judiblaze

Excellent

Good descriptive words. I like it. No highness in haughty..a great ending to your poem. I didn't see anything wrong. Good job

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009

judiblaze, thank you for your great review and compliments. Glad you enjoyed it. With regards, Sue

Comment from jeslaf

Excellent

I love 'no highness in haughty'--amen, sister, and I love it when haughtiness gets knocked down a few pegs. Great use of the form. :)

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 Comment Written 01-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009

I feel like doing some rics on different human behaviours, virtues, attributes and even the negatives. Just a collection to ponder. Haughtiness is something that I cannot bear. "Talk to the hand!". LOL!! Thanks so much for your great review. Sue

Comment from jaeladarling

Excellent

This would go well with one of my story characters. LOL Great job explaining this word with this length. Good flow and all. (This review transcribed by a friend of Jaela's after reading the poem to her since she is ill.)

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 Comment Written 01-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009

She's not seriously ill, is she?? Let me know. Hope it's just a simple cold or something! Tell her I totally VALUE her opinion, as I just love her work! With warmest regards, Sue