CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 95 "Dig My Gigabytes!"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue
See you'r at the AABB rhyme now.
This is a nice write unrestricted by meter ta get all the info and gags in. It's all 'mumbo-jumbo' ta me - I'm content if the light comes on when I stick me toe in the button. Then click on FS and another day wasted, LMAO!
Very different an amusing write, Ray xx
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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Hi, Sue
See you'r at the AABB rhyme now.
This is a nice write unrestricted by meter ta get all the info and gags in. It's all 'mumbo-jumbo' ta me - I'm content if the light comes on when I stick me toe in the button. Then click on FS and another day wasted, LMAO!
Very different an amusing write, Ray xx
Comment Written 15-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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I do love the internet. In the old days, when I wanted to know something, I lived for the Britannica Encyclopedias. Now, it's Google and I can find the world! Even Britannica has its website! Had to have a bit of fun about the growth spurt of the net. Thanks for your review and comments. :-)) Sue
Comment from Angelwhite
This is a good tribute to fanstory, and I think that we all feel like we have learned so much from the people here on the site, whether we were just starting or had been writing for years. I am still learning on how to critique another's work, but I do have to say that I didn't notice any SPAG and you kept the pattern well. Keep it up :)
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This is a good tribute to fanstory, and I think that we all feel like we have learned so much from the people here on the site, whether we were just starting or had been writing for years. I am still learning on how to critique another's work, but I do have to say that I didn't notice any SPAG and you kept the pattern well. Keep it up :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2009
Comment from Curt Mongold
Isn't it so funny that our kids would not know what to do if the net and sat. com. all went down? You'd have a million bleary eyed kids wandering the streets, looking for input!
Fantastic tale, and oh so true! What would we do? How 'bout you?
LOL!
Sincerely,
Curt
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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Isn't it so funny that our kids would not know what to do if the net and sat. com. all went down? You'd have a million bleary eyed kids wandering the streets, looking for input!
Fantastic tale, and oh so true! What would we do? How 'bout you?
LOL!
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment Written 15-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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Ha! "looking for input" - LOL!!! I love the net, but sure am glad I had hopscotch, pick-up sticks, jacks and hide 'n seek! Lived outdoors! Now? If the internet bombed? Show me exactly where my jugular vein is! LOL!!! Luv ya, Cuz - Suz
Comment from Brian S. Pratt
What would I do without the internet
I'd be so lost in this big world, and yet
For all those years it wasn't ours to be
And somehow managed life so easily
--a modern day quandary.
good poem. really liked it.
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What would I do without the internet
I'd be so lost in this big world, and yet
For all those years it wasn't ours to be
And somehow managed life so easily
--a modern day quandary.
good poem. really liked it.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2009
Comment from joan marie
A delightful poem. I do wonder sometimes how long it will be before we find no need to leave our homes. Shop on line, visit online, Pictures online, date online, etc. The list could go on forever. Remember when poeple knew and actually visited their neighbors? Great write and tribute to the site. joan marie
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A delightful poem. I do wonder sometimes how long it will be before we find no need to leave our homes. Shop on line, visit online, Pictures online, date online, etc. The list could go on forever. Remember when poeple knew and actually visited their neighbors? Great write and tribute to the site. joan marie
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2009
Comment from Judian James
Good one Sue. You've traced the history of your experience, as I'm sure is the same for many of us, in a really fun read. I think in the last line, I'd keep your learning in the present, either: "it's where I'll learn to write" or "it's where I learn to write" OR " within this world wide web, I'm learning how to write" something like that. imho
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Good one Sue. You've traced the history of your experience, as I'm sure is the same for many of us, in a really fun read. I think in the last line, I'd keep your learning in the present, either: "it's where I'll learn to write" or "it's where I learn to write" OR " within this world wide web, I'm learning how to write" something like that. imho
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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Jude, excellent recommendation! I like the last one you offered. A change, it is! Thanks very much for your review and most excellent suggestion! :-)) Sue