CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from FredCollingwood
I hope Congress hurries back, I overpaid for my house and lied on my loan app. so I could borrow more than I can afford. Now I want them to bail me out--afterall--it's their fault.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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I hope Congress hurries back, I overpaid for my house and lied on my loan app. so I could borrow more than I can afford. Now I want them to bail me out--afterall--it's their fault.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Being on the payroll of Freddie & Fannie, the corrupt sons-a-bitches sure did help break down regulations, causing this housing mess. Don't even get me started! HA!!!! By the way, I'll have a bailout application in the mail for you today. :-)) Sue
Comment from fastdigits
A tirade beautifully scripted and
artistically presented in a well
crafted manner that brings the anger
that should be on everybody's lips, but
is only found on a few, intelligent as
you and perhaps I, who understand that
no one is for us except us.
Think if no one came out to vote, what
would the politician do? He or she
doesn't have a clue now, without even
one person voting, there would be no one
voting for any one of them. What a great
idea, don;t vote. Besides, people don't
vote for somebody, the vote atgainst somebody.
Anyway, my little rant to go along with yours,
and maybe it will grow.
Well done
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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A tirade beautifully scripted and
artistically presented in a well
crafted manner that brings the anger
that should be on everybody's lips, but
is only found on a few, intelligent as
you and perhaps I, who understand that
no one is for us except us.
Think if no one came out to vote, what
would the politician do? He or she
doesn't have a clue now, without even
one person voting, there would be no one
voting for any one of them. What a great
idea, don;t vote. Besides, people don't
vote for somebody, the vote atgainst somebody.
Anyway, my little rant to go along with yours,
and maybe it will grow.
Well done
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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I can't BELIEVE you said that about a "no-vote"!! HA!! I was saying the same thing; that a revolution would be a zero turn-out for our congressmen. We need to march on Capitol Hill and toss all their asses outta there and get fresh meat. WITH TERM LIMITS! I'm in a sour mood, if you can't tell. HA!! Thanks for your review! :-)) Sue
Comment from Josipher32
This was a well written free verse format poem. Your frustration is very well expressed in this poem. Perfect picture choice for the poem's content.
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This was a well written free verse format poem. Your frustration is very well expressed in this poem. Perfect picture choice for the poem's content.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue.
Re; notes - they sure 'act' all right, they all deserve Oscars, LOL.
I know what you mean by the last line, in view of your situation, but when I first read it I thought ya meant 'cut' their benefits. I thought, 'Hey, ya go off people quick' LOL. I had ta think about it and it's obviously a different way of phrasing. Either that or I'm thick! Anyway, nice rant an I betcha feel a little better for it. Nastiness put nicely. Ray xx
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Hi, Sue.
Re; notes - they sure 'act' all right, they all deserve Oscars, LOL.
I know what you mean by the last line, in view of your situation, but when I first read it I thought ya meant 'cut' their benefits. I thought, 'Hey, ya go off people quick' LOL. I had ta think about it and it's obviously a different way of phrasing. Either that or I'm thick! Anyway, nice rant an I betcha feel a little better for it. Nastiness put nicely. Ray xx
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Ray, you're right. I need to put a question mark next to that! Ha! Thanks much for the highlight there. Yeah, it felt good. Just read in paper today they are cutting budget for disabled kids. And my daughter is on a bloody WAIT LIST for a simple day program!!! I'm livid!
Comment from Curt Mongold
What a write on rant you wrought! It is also so sadly true.
The government quit working "for the people" long ago. Budget cuts for healthcare while bailing out billionaires is not my idea of America.
A very potent piece cuz.
Curt
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What a write on rant you wrought! It is also so sadly true.
The government quit working "for the people" long ago. Budget cuts for healthcare while bailing out billionaires is not my idea of America.
A very potent piece cuz.
Curt
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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You got it there, cuz! I'm up to here in all of it. Then, I open up the newspaper here in Ohio where they are cutting the budge for the disabled! And my daughter is on a frickin' "WAIT LIST" for services??!! Just a place to go each day for a day program?!!!! You can imagine how I freaked out.