CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Juleeann
What a great piece to wake up to this morning. Your words made my day. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Carry on and God bless,
Juleeann
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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What a great piece to wake up to this morning. Your words made my day. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Carry on and God bless,
Juleeann
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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Juleeann, so glad these few words could reach out! Had a bad day yesterday and today, all is well. Now, why is that??!! Ha! Thank you very much for your most generous review and words. With regards, Sue
Comment from Algernon
Hope, the last thing to leave Pandora's Box.
Such an uplifting write.
It would go well in a greetings card, for those who are feeling life's strains..
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Hope, the last thing to leave Pandora's Box.
Such an uplifting write.
It would go well in a greetings card, for those who are feeling life's strains..
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
Comment from rmdelta
Sue,
Ok, I have no idea what a triolet is anymore than hiku or shiku. I know what I like and I like what you write. No matter what name it's called, your writings always touch me. Well done, my friend.
Reggie
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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Sue,
Ok, I have no idea what a triolet is anymore than hiku or shiku. I know what I like and I like what you write. No matter what name it's called, your writings always touch me. Well done, my friend.
Reggie
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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LOL!! Reggie, I love your visits because you always make me crack up!! Ha! Oh, yeah and because you like my work! I'm going to write a "whatchamacallit" just for you. Reggie, thanks so much for your most kind review. With warm regards, Sue
Comment from TinyTeena
A truly excellent poem and a pleasure to read. Gives a great message to all - that even though we may have problems, they always end up going away. when the worry and fear subside, then Hope replaces them. I like the lines - "As time, our friend, makes all brand new, our burdens lift. they always do" Time is our friend because when we have time to think the problem over, it's not as big as first it seemed. Your poem keeps to the correct pattern of the Triolet - excellent, no corrections needed.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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A truly excellent poem and a pleasure to read. Gives a great message to all - that even though we may have problems, they always end up going away. when the worry and fear subside, then Hope replaces them. I like the lines - "As time, our friend, makes all brand new, our burdens lift. they always do" Time is our friend because when we have time to think the problem over, it's not as big as first it seemed. Your poem keeps to the correct pattern of the Triolet - excellent, no corrections needed.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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TinyTeena, thank you for your most kind review and lovely words. And for highlighting those lines you liked! Yesterday was blue and today is grand....go figure. :-)) Sue
Comment from laurelp
I took your words as solace to my thoughts. It read very well and was easy to understand and interpret. The flow of the poem was easy to follow. Good job.
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I took your words as solace to my thoughts. It read very well and was easy to understand and interpret. The flow of the poem was easy to follow. Good job.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue. I gotta say I'm not keen on these repetition thingies, though you've sure done the form justice here. The rep is almost 'invisible', which I guess is the aim.
Well done, Ray xx
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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Hi, Sue. I gotta say I'm not keen on these repetition thingies, though you've sure done the form justice here. The rep is almost 'invisible', which I guess is the aim.
Well done, Ray xx
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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Ray, I know that deep down inside, you really do love repetition! HA! Yes, that's what I love about the triolet (the hidden repeats). Thanks for your lovely review and kind words. :-) Sue
Comment from Srinivasan
It's really great to read the poem that infuses bubbling faith and hope in the minds of the readers. The lines are short and reverberating. All the best and thanks for sharing.
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It's really great to read the poem that infuses bubbling faith and hope in the minds of the readers. The lines are short and reverberating. All the best and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
Comment from Gypsymooncat
* * * * * * My virtual six (with no real ones left). I thought you did a marvellous job with this form of poetry, and I very much enjoyed its uplifting message. I'll remember your words when I'm a-sittin' in the Dentist's chair tomorrow ... xoxoxoxoxox
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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* * * * * * My virtual six (with no real ones left). I thought you did a marvellous job with this form of poetry, and I very much enjoyed its uplifting message. I'll remember your words when I'm a-sittin' in the Dentist's chair tomorrow ... xoxoxoxoxox
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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alpacalday, now, THAT is a great idea! Print this baby out and read it while those tools are whirring - HA! And thanks for that virtual sixer! I really appreciate your very kind review and words. With regards, Sue
Comment from rama devi
I love this! Such a song of hope and positivity!
Wonderfully presented wiht apt artwork (what a cute rock!)
Nicely rhymed and a true to form triolet. I love the simplicity and musicality of this style.
Bravo. No nits.
Warm Regards,
rama devi
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I love this! Such a song of hope and positivity!
Wonderfully presented wiht apt artwork (what a cute rock!)
Nicely rhymed and a true to form triolet. I love the simplicity and musicality of this style.
Bravo. No nits.
Warm Regards,
rama devi
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
Comment from Curt Mongold
Did you read my latest post and want to give me hope? LOL! I didn't think so. But it's very nice all the same. I like the format and the word usage very much. Keep it up poet cuz!
Sincerely,
Curt
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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Did you read my latest post and want to give me hope? LOL! I didn't think so. But it's very nice all the same. I like the format and the word usage very much. Keep it up poet cuz!
Sincerely,
Curt
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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No! I missed it. Going to hunt it down now - Ha! - So glad you liked this triolet. Been meaning to write one. And thanks for your very kind review! :-)) Cuz Sue
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If I was on your fan list, as you are mine, you wouldn't miss it! LOL!
C'mon cuz, what's family for?
Cousin Curt
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You ARE on my fan list, CUZ!!! I'm going to have to see how I missed it.
You know I ALWAYS read your stuff. Well, okay....maybe I have the occasional misfire of a synapse, but that's RARE!
:o)) Sue