CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Pen&Ink
This is a great little story. Of course, the format makes it become extremely small at the end. You fitted everything important into the story, going from nine beats to one in nine short lines. Wouldn't change a thing.
Ray
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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2008
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This is a great little story. Of course, the format makes it become extremely small at the end. You fitted everything important into the story, going from nine beats to one in nine short lines. Wouldn't change a thing.
Ray
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2008
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Pen&Ink, Thanks for your great review! And your specific comments. With regards, Sue