CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from AndStuff
This is so sweet and bittersweet too. I like the hopeful wonderful ending. It gives hope to those who have lost in love before. Nice work! Thanks for sharing it.
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This is so sweet and bittersweet too. I like the hopeful wonderful ending. It gives hope to those who have lost in love before. Nice work! Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2008
Comment from LFPwrite
Very clever -- good use of rhyme. I love the sudden jump "Damn! Here I am." Really develops the tone well. I can't see how this could be improved. Good poem. Made me smile.
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2008
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Very clever -- good use of rhyme. I love the sudden jump "Damn! Here I am." Really develops the tone well. I can't see how this could be improved. Good poem. Made me smile.
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2008
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LFP, so glad it made you smile! My first 'vers beaucoup" and had fun with it! A little sass and spice. Thanks for your great review. With regards, Sue
Comment from Curt Mongold
I love it!
This is a great Vers Beaucoup, no doubt about it. Maybe we ARE related!
Sister poet, I commend you. Couldn't have done it better myself.
Warmly,
Curt
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I love it!
This is a great Vers Beaucoup, no doubt about it. Maybe we ARE related!
Sister poet, I commend you. Couldn't have done it better myself.
Warmly,
Curt
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2008