CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Word Weaver
Oh, I liked this very much! I've never heard of a Tetractys, but it sounds great so I'm going to try to write one of them. Thanks for sharing the poem and the link. Yours, Word Weaver..
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Oh, I liked this very much! I've never heard of a Tetractys, but it sounds great so I'm going to try to write one of them. Thanks for sharing the poem and the link. Yours, Word Weaver..
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from XCBLG
Great work with a strong message in few worlds. The art work and meaningful words draw attention and provoke thought that will hopefully lead to a better understanding of this complex disability. It's my first exposure to tetractys. XCBLG
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Great work with a strong message in few worlds. The art work and meaningful words draw attention and provoke thought that will hopefully lead to a better understanding of this complex disability. It's my first exposure to tetractys. XCBLG
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from Stuart7
I know of this condition and the frustration the
suffering individual experiences as well as their
carers. You have given them a voice through your
tribute. Regards Stuart.
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I know of this condition and the frustration the
suffering individual experiences as well as their
carers. You have given them a voice through your
tribute. Regards Stuart.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from P1
nice tribute poem putting into words what your daughter
probably cannot. a good and simple explaination well
written. good luck in the contest hugs lynda.
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nice tribute poem putting into words what your daughter
probably cannot. a good and simple explaination well
written. good luck in the contest hugs lynda.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from EKPoet
i think the structure of this poem, with its bare, even stark one word lines , really captured the feeling of autism and the inability of these people to communicate effectively. a great sense of the contrast between what is going on inside someone's mind, as depicted in that long descriptive line, and our perseption of it, in those adjectives listed at the beginning. wonderful creative piece with lots of emotion eKPoet
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i think the structure of this poem, with its bare, even stark one word lines , really captured the feeling of autism and the inability of these people to communicate effectively. a great sense of the contrast between what is going on inside someone's mind, as depicted in that long descriptive line, and our perseption of it, in those adjectives listed at the beginning. wonderful creative piece with lots of emotion eKPoet
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from RaymondJohn
I was once suspected as having Ausperger's. I'm so pleased with the advances that are being made in the field of autism. Thanks for bringing the topic to the surface. Ray.
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I was once suspected as having Ausperger's. I'm so pleased with the advances that are being made in the field of autism. Thanks for bringing the topic to the surface. Ray.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from LadyMary
The lack of understanding of autism is well illustrated in this writing which obviously comes from your heart. The wording is so descriptive, and the artwork is so poignant. Well Done. And blessings to you and your daughter. LadyMary
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The lack of understanding of autism is well illustrated in this writing which obviously comes from your heart. The wording is so descriptive, and the artwork is so poignant. Well Done. And blessings to you and your daughter. LadyMary
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from Leonidus07
I just reviewed one of your other poems, and it was great, but this one has more emotion to it! once again, no errors that i noticed, and the poem flowed very nicely! Great job!
~Leonidus07
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I just reviewed one of your other poems, and it was great, but this one has more emotion to it! once again, no errors that i noticed, and the poem flowed very nicely! Great job!
~Leonidus07
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from DawningOne
I LOVED the artwork! What a great expression of autism! I have two very close friends who both have children with autism. When we all get together life is really exhillerating! They each are such special kids. I liked the poem as well. I also have six children. Congratulations on exploring all these art forms and dimensions. God bless you and welcome to fanstory.com.
Much love,
Dawn
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I LOVED the artwork! What a great expression of autism! I have two very close friends who both have children with autism. When we all get together life is really exhillerating! They each are such special kids. I liked the poem as well. I also have six children. Congratulations on exploring all these art forms and dimensions. God bless you and welcome to fanstory.com.
Much love,
Dawn
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from Nanny 6
Another well done piece of poetry in art. Simple, to the point, getting across to the reader the simplicity of autism. Your author notes are apprciated. I'm truly impressed with your work! Judy
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Another well done piece of poetry in art. Simple, to the point, getting across to the reader the simplicity of autism. Your author notes are apprciated. I'm truly impressed with your work! Judy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008