CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Josipher32
I thought this was a well written poem with a great picture choice and soothing memories expressed. Good luck to you, my friend!
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I thought this was a well written poem with a great picture choice and soothing memories expressed. Good luck to you, my friend!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
People knock it, but the sound of a well-played banjo is something that can just reach right in and make you smile.
I love it myself.
Beauty of a poem, dude. Well done.
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People knock it, but the sound of a well-played banjo is something that can just reach right in and make you smile.
I love it myself.
Beauty of a poem, dude. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from ledford
Aww... how sweet:-)
What a wonderful tribute to your dad.
I loved the last lines. So beautiful!
Good luck in the contest:-)
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Aww... how sweet:-)
What a wonderful tribute to your dad.
I loved the last lines. So beautiful!
Good luck in the contest:-)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from davidray
Your dad's probably having a ball entertaining everyone up in Heaven stringing on the ol' banjo. They are always such a pleasure to hear, when one knows how to play them correctly. Enjoyed this ... the stanzas, the rhymes worked very well.
Good luck in the contest.
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Your dad's probably having a ball entertaining everyone up in Heaven stringing on the ol' banjo. They are always such a pleasure to hear, when one knows how to play them correctly. Enjoyed this ... the stanzas, the rhymes worked very well.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from Brandenpaul
It's amazing how music can bring such joy. A simple instrument like a banjo can make a family happy and leave them with memories. Easy to read and flowed. Could almost hear the banjo in the background as I read.
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It's amazing how music can bring such joy. A simple instrument like a banjo can make a family happy and leave them with memories. Easy to read and flowed. Could almost hear the banjo in the background as I read.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from Valerie Julia Ann
A wonderful tribute to your father. The cadence flowed nicely due to the alliteration, consonance and assonance throughout the poem. A pleasure to read.
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A wonderful tribute to your father. The cadence flowed nicely due to the alliteration, consonance and assonance throughout the poem. A pleasure to read.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from jackiesmuse
This is a very touching poem. I am a musician and relate to this tender tribute to your father.
Only one line made me stumble a bit:
Then, nothin' he couldn't do
Best of luck in the contest with this fine poem.
:-) Jackie
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This is a very touching poem. I am a musician and relate to this tender tribute to your father.
Only one line made me stumble a bit:
Then, nothin' he couldn't do
Best of luck in the contest with this fine poem.
:-) Jackie
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from DeboraDyess
My daddy left scrolls of sci-fi stories he'd written on a tele-type. The paper came off in rolls, and I have them tucked away. It's my daddy's 'banjo'; our memories of his love and life. Thanks for sharing yours. Your daddy would be proud. Blessings, Deb
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My daddy left scrolls of sci-fi stories he'd written on a tele-type. The paper came off in rolls, and I have them tucked away. It's my daddy's 'banjo'; our memories of his love and life. Thanks for sharing yours. Your daddy would be proud. Blessings, Deb
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from peggysis64
"Daddy's Banjo" is a beautifully written tribute to a father who left you with such strong memories. Vivid imagery and your strong descriptive scheme allowed me to paint a picture of "Daddy" and his banjo in my mind as I read on. No corrections needed. kay
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"Daddy's Banjo" is a beautifully written tribute to a father who left you with such strong memories. Vivid imagery and your strong descriptive scheme allowed me to paint a picture of "Daddy" and his banjo in my mind as I read on. No corrections needed. kay
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from Paradox Tremors
God just needed a good banjo player In heaven. Beautifully written and easy to follow. You was blessed to have such a talented and loving father to grow with.
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I thought I read this before. Still as good as ever!!!!
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God just needed a good banjo player In heaven. Beautifully written and easy to follow. You was blessed to have such a talented and loving father to grow with.
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I thought I read this before. Still as good as ever!!!!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008