Robins Come Out in Spring
The changing of winter to spring40 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
There is a lovely flow to your poem and the rhyming is pleasant. Reading about fall and winter already gives me pause lol. I can't believe how fast summer has disappeared. but i do look forward to spring and the beautiful robins as you described so well. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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There is a lovely flow to your poem and the rhyming is pleasant. Reading about fall and winter already gives me pause lol. I can't believe how fast summer has disappeared. but i do look forward to spring and the beautiful robins as you described so well. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and your excellent rating
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Pam,
This poem leaves strong image of all seasons but mostly Winter and Spring. The robin is a good omen of Spring. Though here in unseasonably warm Winters we see robins all year round.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have wonderful rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Hi Pam,
This poem leaves strong image of all seasons but mostly Winter and Spring. The robin is a good omen of Spring. Though here in unseasonably warm Winters we see robins all year round.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have wonderful rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful, lovely comments and your excellent rating
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You are most kindly welcome on all accounts, Pam.
Joan
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem beautifully captures the transition between autumn and winter, and then from winter to spring, using vivid imagery and a rhythmic structure. The imagery of leaves floating, the stark contrast of winter's arrival, and the eventual rebirth of spring are well depicted.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Your poem beautifully captures the transition between autumn and winter, and then from winter to spring, using vivid imagery and a rhythmic structure. The imagery of leaves floating, the stark contrast of winter's arrival, and the eventual rebirth of spring are well depicted.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your beautiful comments and your excellent rating
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written poem and I enjoyed very much listening to it rhymes well and it moves well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I also wish you a very wonderful week. God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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This is a very well written poem and I enjoyed very much listening to it rhymes well and it moves well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I also wish you a very wonderful week. God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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thank you for your wonderful comments and your excellent rating
Comment from Nicki.B
What a beautiful poem about the transitioning of seasons! In Ireland we are transitioning from summer to autumn.
It's funny I hate to see summer go as I do love autumn too. Just like how I love to see the first signs of spring which you've captured wonderfully, as winter just goes on too long!
Some beautiful scenes captured throughout, very well writtenwith lovely rhyme, well done.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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What a beautiful poem about the transitioning of seasons! In Ireland we are transitioning from summer to autumn.
It's funny I hate to see summer go as I do love autumn too. Just like how I love to see the first signs of spring which you've captured wonderfully, as winter just goes on too long!
Some beautiful scenes captured throughout, very well writtenwith lovely rhyme, well done.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your beautiful comments and wonderful review
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You're very welcome Pam!
Comment from Begin Again
You are made to write or compose these types of poetry. You draw the reader into each season and make us experience it and then gently move to the next until the Robins have returned. Wonderful!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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You are made to write or compose these types of poetry. You draw the reader into each season and make us experience it and then gently move to the next until the Robins have returned. Wonderful!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your lovely comments and wonderful review
Comment from LJbutterfly
You have covered the splendor of the seasons from late Autumn to Winter, to the emergence of Spring's beauty, with the return of birds, blossoms, and fruit. Your well-chosen words provide vivid and satisfying imagery as you welcome in a new season of Robins.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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You have covered the splendor of the seasons from late Autumn to Winter, to the emergence of Spring's beauty, with the return of birds, blossoms, and fruit. Your well-chosen words provide vivid and satisfying imagery as you welcome in a new season of Robins.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was a very well written transitional poem. I liked how you used the birds to transition the seasons. The artwork was nice. It was kind of you to make the font bold for those of us that have trouble seeing. Might I suggest enlarging the text a bit? Just a thought. Great job!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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This was a very well written transitional poem. I liked how you used the birds to transition the seasons. The artwork was nice. It was kind of you to make the font bold for those of us that have trouble seeing. Might I suggest enlarging the text a bit? Just a thought. Great job!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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I've enlarged the font as much as I can chosen the largest possible font. Thank you for your wonderful comments and beautiful review.
Comment from nomi338
Living in sunny Southern California, the main differences we notice is the changes wrought by standard and daylight savings time.. Where I live it is not uncommon to experience an 80 degree day in late December. I too love seeing new growth take place, but here of late I just go to the grocery store for my fresh fruits and vegetables.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Living in sunny Southern California, the main differences we notice is the changes wrought by standard and daylight savings time.. Where I live it is not uncommon to experience an 80 degree day in late December. I too love seeing new growth take place, but here of late I just go to the grocery store for my fresh fruits and vegetables.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your humorous and wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from royowen
Wow you really have got a backlog of poetry to support your frequent posting, and all very polished, although I have a penchant for rhythm, possibly born of s musical background, you are a genuine poet, which means you won't have problems tackling other forms, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Wow you really have got a backlog of poetry to support your frequent posting, and all very polished, although I have a penchant for rhythm, possibly born of s musical background, you are a genuine poet, which means you won't have problems tackling other forms, well done, blessings Roy
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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I used to ride a lot of haiku and tanka. Maybe I'll tackle those after I get rid of this other backlog
Thank you for your wonderful comments
