Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Chapter 11 B"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story is filled with tension. It did a great job of keeping me on the edge of my seat. The dialogue flows naturally, and each character's voice is distinct. Sami and Noah's are particularly interesting with their evolving relationship adding to the story. The pacing is excellent, with each scene driving the plot forward. The twists and turns kept me engaged!
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reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Your story is filled with tension. It did a great job of keeping me on the edge of my seat. The dialogue flows naturally, and each character's voice is distinct. Sami and Noah's are particularly interesting with their evolving relationship adding to the story. The pacing is excellent, with each scene driving the plot forward. The twists and turns kept me engaged!
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Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.