Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

Excellent poem using personification to make Death into a sort of stalker who keeps trying but failing to get the job done. You must be doing something right. Keep doing it! I like having you around.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

I am a stubborn thing. Thanks for the read, Karen

Comment from isabelteeth

Excellent

Really fun to read. makes one stop and think. "he knows i will not be nudged along" is a beautiful line. you remind me that writing really is musical.

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thanks so much. I appreciate the read. Karen

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There are many dangers that could take our life and it sounds like you have been successful in dodging death for a long time Karen, I enjoyed your amusing post, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thanks so much. Beats the alternative. :-)