Comment from
Paul McFarland
I think this is your best chapter, Barb. The flow of the story is smooth and there is no extraneous material. It looks like George Elliot may be seeing the light with regard to his son.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your authentic dialogue here Barbara as you bring some gritty information about these events here and how some people try to manipulate the police. Thank goodness for evidence to disprove such liars in life. A fine post Barbara, as this great story unfolds, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
Thank you for the encouragement.