Guided by Faith
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The corrections seem just fine, and you have moved the story on well to Emma accepting Seth's help, finally. This is a big step and I hope she won't go back on it. I felt the bit about Peggy was out of place. It didn't seem connected to the rest. kay
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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The corrections seem just fine, and you have moved the story on well to Emma accepting Seth's help, finally. This is a big step and I hope she won't go back on it. I felt the bit about Peggy was out of place. It didn't seem connected to the rest. kay
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Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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The part about Peggy will connect very soon. It needs to be there. It's forshadowing. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
Emma always has something happening to her and giving Seth a reason to be there for her. I don't why he worries about the eight year age differencfe. Maybe it's because the 9 year different between my husband and I worked out just find for 61 years.
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Emma always has something happening to her and giving Seth a reason to be there for her. I don't why he worries about the eight year age differencfe. Maybe it's because the 9 year different between my husband and I worked out just find for 61 years.
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Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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He's worried because he's associating it with helping raise his sister when his parents died. His sister and Emma are the same age. Thank you for the kind review.