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Comment from jessizero
This story was compelling and entertaining. I had no idea where this was going, but I didn't expect that ending! It was great. You did a good job using just dialogue. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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This story was compelling and entertaining. I had no idea where this was going, but I didn't expect that ending! It was great. You did a good job using just dialogue. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you Jessi! I am glad you were kept in the dark until the end! Glad too you enjoyed it. Thanks so much.
Wendy
Comment from Pantygynt
Oops! There is a terrible warning hidden away in this one. Things are often exactly as they seem but not for the obvious reason. I though this was a n excellent little piece. People are often too ready to jump at the wrong conclusion because it is the more interesting.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Oops! There is a terrible warning hidden away in this one. Things are often exactly as they seem but not for the obvious reason. I though this was a n excellent little piece. People are often too ready to jump at the wrong conclusion because it is the more interesting.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for the super rating and six stars. Greatly appreciated. You are so right - it?s very easy to jump to wrong conclusions.
Wendy
