Angry cloak
A pantoum poem.41 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Anger has a way of capturing all of us at some time or another. I try to keep a very even keel and not let much of anything bother me.
Nicely worded.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Anger has a way of capturing all of us at some time or another. I try to keep a very even keel and not let much of anything bother me.
Nicely worded.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Gary, for your kind comments and an expressive review, blessings Roy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your pantoum read well, Roy. The color scheme and picture
paired perfectly with your well-chosen words. You did a great
job with a complex style. Your repeated lines worked in each
verse. I agree with your words. Once one's words/actions are
heard/felt, they cannot be changed just as time cannot be rewound
to the time before that. Thanks for the notes, too.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Your pantoum read well, Roy. The color scheme and picture
paired perfectly with your well-chosen words. You did a great
job with a complex style. Your repeated lines worked in each
verse. I agree with your words. Once one's words/actions are
heard/felt, they cannot be changed just as time cannot be rewound
to the time before that. Thanks for the notes, too.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Jan, for your kind comments and an expressive review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
You're right that anger is a normal human emotion but it can cause all kinds of pain to self and others. Praise the Holy Spirit Who can help us control it. Great pantoum form.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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You're right that anger is a normal human emotion but it can cause all kinds of pain to self and others. Praise the Holy Spirit Who can help us control it. Great pantoum form.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Helen, for your kind comments and an expressive review, blessings Roy
Comment from Rebel Jim
Roy your words are so awesome!
Please excuse me for not responding
to all of your stuff, I can't keep up with ya!
But know this, my Friend....
I like EVERY word!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Roy your words are so awesome!
Please excuse me for not responding
to all of your stuff, I can't keep up with ya!
But know this, my Friend....
I like EVERY word!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Don?t apologise, you do your best, I appreciate you Jim, thanks for the great review and comments, blessings Roy
Comment from Anne Johnston
This looks like a poem style that requires a lot of concentration and effort. I like the scripture you have chosen in your notes. Most of us get angry at times, but it is how we react to it that counts, being forgiving and not letting the anger lead us to sin.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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This looks like a poem style that requires a lot of concentration and effort. I like the scripture you have chosen in your notes. Most of us get angry at times, but it is how we react to it that counts, being forgiving and not letting the anger lead us to sin.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thanks Anne, for these lovely comments and a super review, blessings Roy
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You are welcome, Roy
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a really interesting, and complicated to me, style of poetry, Roy. An angry cloak is a unique way of describing that feeling that can descend upon us all at times. Well done. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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This is a really interesting, and complicated to me, style of poetry, Roy. An angry cloak is a unique way of describing that feeling that can descend upon us all at times. Well done. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thanks Judy, for these excellent comments and review blessings Roy
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You?re most welcome, Roy.
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you for the uniquely crafted poem. This form is wonderful and so is the needed word inside. The anger of man truly does not achieve the righteous of God. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the uniquely crafted poem. This form is wonderful and so is the needed word inside. The anger of man truly does not achieve the righteous of God. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thanks Sally, for these marvellous comments and review blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do understand how anger can really only hurt yourself. Jesus showed anger a few times, but it was always against evil and to show the glory of God. We could learn so much from the example He set. Thank you for sharing this poem.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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I do understand how anger can really only hurt yourself. Jesus showed anger a few times, but it was always against evil and to show the glory of God. We could learn so much from the example He set. Thank you for sharing this poem.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thanks Barbara for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Brett Matthew West
This poem seemed to indicate although a person sometimes "wears an angry cloak" that emotion can cause them shame when they allow anger to take them too far as in "fury comes the pain," and the only one they hurt is themself.
A unique format with strong rhymes that include cloak/soak, storms/forms, and wind/rescind.
In Notes the omitted word needs to replace the htlm error A?AC??.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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This poem seemed to indicate although a person sometimes "wears an angry cloak" that emotion can cause them shame when they allow anger to take them too far as in "fury comes the pain," and the only one they hurt is themself.
A unique format with strong rhymes that include cloak/soak, storms/forms, and wind/rescind.
In Notes the omitted word needs to replace the htlm error A?AC??.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thanks Brett, for these splendid comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
Hey Roy.
This is a well done pantoum about the need to control anger and deal with the pain it causes. I like the artwork for it shows what anger may look like in the brain and also the cracks it cause on the outside.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hey Roy.
This is a well done pantoum about the need to control anger and deal with the pain it causes. I like the artwork for it shows what anger may look like in the brain and also the cracks it cause on the outside.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Joan, for these splendid comments and a super review, blessings Roy
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My pleasure, Roy.
Joan
