Football - A Novel
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Comment from royowen
George definitely wasn't very nice, and poor Katherine suffered the consequences, and one can understand why. She deserves better, as all women do, and I think that Gabriel will provide that for her, and be a role model for the boys. Beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Typo : didn't accept (a) cross country scholarship. 2: grooming you (a) trophy wife.
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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George definitely wasn't very nice, and poor Katherine suffered the consequences, and one can understand why. She deserves better, as all women do, and I think that Gabriel will provide that for her, and be a role model for the boys. Beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Typo : didn't accept (a) cross country scholarship. 2: grooming you (a) trophy wife.
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Thank you. I've made the corrections. I have horrible habit of leaving out those little words. When I edit I read as if they're there.
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Not a problem Barbara,