Football - A Novel
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Comment from Judy Lawless
I guess I got impatient, Barbara. lol It just seemed like ages since I'd heard from Gabriel and Katherine.
This is an excellent chapter that keeps us involved and present right to the end, not even noticing the length. Sometimes you just have to keep somethings together.
I found a few spags:
"If we haven't done anything immoral by now, we won't and we now(know) he's there."
"I think those are (the) only times."
"Kate will be here in a shortly." - will be here shortly or here in a second
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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I guess I got impatient, Barbara. lol It just seemed like ages since I'd heard from Gabriel and Katherine.
This is an excellent chapter that keeps us involved and present right to the end, not even noticing the length. Sometimes you just have to keep somethings together.
I found a few spags:
"If we haven't done anything immoral by now, we won't and we now(know) he's there."
"I think those are (the) only times."
"Kate will be here in a shortly." - will be here shortly or here in a second
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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I have mad every correction. Thank you.