A Glass Heart
The nothingness of a lost love.41 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
All love's labour lost, now love is gone, dreams fade to emptiness, meaning of life is now shattered; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this work.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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All love's labour lost, now love is gone, dreams fade to emptiness, meaning of life is now shattered; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this work.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from JudyE
Your poem, A Glass Heart, is a worthy entry in the 20 Word Poem contest. I particular I like the lines 'battered, almost shattered'. Dreams do fade to emptiness if our hearts are broken. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Your poem, A Glass Heart, is a worthy entry in the 20 Word Poem contest. I particular I like the lines 'battered, almost shattered'. Dreams do fade to emptiness if our hearts are broken. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a very good entry for the 20 word poem contest. The word count is in line and the content leads the reader to escape with the meaning behind the words. Regret, out of time, lost love, loneliness - it has a mood of its own. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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This is a very good entry for the 20 word poem contest. The word count is in line and the content leads the reader to escape with the meaning behind the words. Regret, out of time, lost love, loneliness - it has a mood of its own. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Therese Caron
I just used my last six, or I would give it to you for this beautiful poem. I only give sixes to poems I can feel, and I can feel this one (unfortunately). Slowly bleeding out is outstanding. Your image is gorgeous and the colors and font complement your writing. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I just used my last six, or I would give it to you for this beautiful poem. I only give sixes to poems I can feel, and I can feel this one (unfortunately). Slowly bleeding out is outstanding. Your image is gorgeous and the colors and font complement your writing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
I really enjoyed reading your poem. The word count is perfect, and I also liked your word choice. One look at the title, and I clicked on your poem to read it. Good luck in the contest!!!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. The word count is perfect, and I also liked your word choice. One look at the title, and I clicked on your poem to read it. Good luck in the contest!!!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words! I'll be by to read.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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I'm surprised! I definitely could not do that.
Comment from Maureen Sky
Love the photo! Very nice short poem but packs a big punch of heartfelt emotions - one can feel your pain. Times are difficult enough without having to lose someone or something dear to us. Great job here!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Love the photo! Very nice short poem but packs a big punch of heartfelt emotions - one can feel your pain. Times are difficult enough without having to lose someone or something dear to us. Great job here!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Lost love is devastating to say the least. No matter the method of lost, or when it happened, it is an overwhelming calamity rarely forgotten, and hard to overcome.
A wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Lost love is devastating to say the least. No matter the method of lost, or when it happened, it is an overwhelming calamity rarely forgotten, and hard to overcome.
A wonderful poem.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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You sure did a great job on short notice.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Sometimes that's the way it goes. No matter how hard you might have tried in a relationship. it doesn't seem to matter. It's not easy to deal with a lost love. The picture you chose is beautiful and enhances the poetry well.
Stay safe and healthy!
Patty
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Sometimes that's the way it goes. No matter how hard you might have tried in a relationship. it doesn't seem to matter. It's not easy to deal with a lost love. The picture you chose is beautiful and enhances the poetry well.
Stay safe and healthy!
Patty
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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You're quite welcome! Sometimes a quick one thrown out on a whim turn out to be some of the best!
Patty
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your very evocative poem and echoing sounds plus reinforcing artwork selection to intensify the message. Best wishes in the 20-Word Poem contest and better dreams- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I admired your very evocative poem and echoing sounds plus reinforcing artwork selection to intensify the message. Best wishes in the 20-Word Poem contest and better dreams- Joan
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
Nice job with the free verse here, my friend. Liked that "batters/ shatters" in the opening, you get the heartbeat rhythm there in that too. I liked the fragmented feel of this and I think it conveyed this sense of a broken relationship, feelings bleeding out. Fading away to emptiness. The world is an empty place without love. estory
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Nice job with the free verse here, my friend. Liked that "batters/ shatters" in the opening, you get the heartbeat rhythm there in that too. I liked the fragmented feel of this and I think it conveyed this sense of a broken relationship, feelings bleeding out. Fading away to emptiness. The world is an empty place without love. estory
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike