Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Herbie Wants to Mind-Merge"Eric And The Lost City of Atlantis
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Comment from BethShelby
You have a very creative imagination. I'm sure kids must love reading these books and going on adventures with Eric and his robot friends. I enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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You have a very creative imagination. I'm sure kids must love reading these books and going on adventures with Eric and his robot friends. I enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Beth! I'm delighted you enjoyed reading this part. I do have fun writing them, lol. Thanks again, my friend. :)) sandra xxx
Comment from damommy
I can hardly wait to see what happens next. The world you've created in this story is awesome. What an imagination you have. I like that you give us just enough tension and suspense without anything really bad happening to Eric and his friends.
-Once they'd reached the huge doors[,]
-This turned out to be the home of the largest pool he'd ever seen[. It] even had its own waterfalls and palm trees.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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I can hardly wait to see what happens next. The world you've created in this story is awesome. What an imagination you have. I like that you give us just enough tension and suspense without anything really bad happening to Eric and his friends.
-Once they'd reached the huge doors[,]
-This turned out to be the home of the largest pool he'd ever seen[. It] even had its own waterfalls and palm trees.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you my dear Yvonne, for this wonderful review. I'm really pleased you like my version of what Atlantis looks like. :)) Now I've got to sort this communication problem out. Thanks for the two edits, I've corrected them both. That's so good of you. Sending you a big hug, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Things are getting interesting now with actual conversation starting to take place between Eric and the Atlantans! To think that Atlantis was a big space ship that perhaps just flew away and thats why we cant find a clue about it also makes somewhat sense to me! Best wishes for the next chapter!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Things are getting interesting now with actual conversation starting to take place between Eric and the Atlantans! To think that Atlantis was a big space ship that perhaps just flew away and thats why we cant find a clue about it also makes somewhat sense to me! Best wishes for the next chapter!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Aaqib, for this lovely review. I'm really pleased you think that the spaceship makes sense, you'll learn more about it later. Big hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are most welcome! :-)
Yeah the whole spaceship thing adequately answers the disappearance of Atlantis!!
Comment from Ulla
Wonderful, Sandra. Your imagination just has no end. I love it. And brave Eric has gone along with it all, but now his brain is being overloaded. It is scary stuff, and I hope Herbie can save him, one more time? Or has he gone one step too far, this time? Big hugs to you, my friend. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Wonderful, Sandra. Your imagination just has no end. I love it. And brave Eric has gone along with it all, but now his brain is being overloaded. It is scary stuff, and I hope Herbie can save him, one more time? Or has he gone one step too far, this time? Big hugs to you, my friend. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for those shiny stars, Ulla! I really appreciate them and the fabulous review you've given me. It can't be easy having loads of voices throwing questions inside your head at the same time. Biggest hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from amada
Hi Sandra, it was great to find and read this chapter. I enjoyed reading the very descriptive images. Very well written adventures of a world i don't know much about. Great awakening.
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Hi Sandra, it was great to find and read this chapter. I enjoyed reading the very descriptive images. Very well written adventures of a world i don't know much about. Great awakening.
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Amada, for this really nice review! It's a world I'm just discovering, too, my friend. :)) I'm delighted you enjoyed this part, and I hope to see you again. Big hug, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from royowen
Poor Herbie, not able to bear the mind contact, they seemed to overwhelm him, and of course we're all made differently, so that makes sense. I like where your going with this Sandra, I sense this might be tough for you, but you'll work it out, you're incredibly clever, well done, excellent episode, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Poor Herbie, not able to bear the mind contact, they seemed to overwhelm him, and of course we're all made differently, so that makes sense. I like where your going with this Sandra, I sense this might be tough for you, but you'll work it out, you're incredibly clever, well done, excellent episode, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Your senses are right, Roy, this part did push my mind to the limit. I had three tries to get it right so I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for this lovely review, and a huge hug for that really nice compliment. You're always so nice. Lots of love, my friend. Sandra xxx
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Yes the last bit where poor Eric couldn?t stand all the ?voices? might be tough for you, but you?ll work it out, perhaps with Gizmo and Herbie,
Comment from Drew Delaney
Quite an interesting read, Sandra! I like how to ended the part to give heightened curiosity to the reader.
Now they realised they could be understood, I believe this would read a bit better... Now that they realised they could be understood. Just my opinion
Drew xx
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Quite an interesting read, Sandra! I like how to ended the part to give heightened curiosity to the reader.
Now they realised they could be understood, I believe this would read a bit better... Now that they realised they could be understood. Just my opinion
Drew xx
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you for another lovely review, Drew, and your helpful suggestion. I've been and added 'that' to the sentence. Thanks so much for pointing it out. I really appreciate it. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Super chapter! I so enjoy reading these adventures. Even adults (old ones, like me) can read them and be fascinated.
Two small things found:
1. "...almost caught up with him (here I would put a full stop.)He then turned around..."
2. ...once reached the huge doors, they swung open...
Both to clarify, not because they were faults.
I hope this helps.
Marjon.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Super chapter! I so enjoy reading these adventures. Even adults (old ones, like me) can read them and be fascinated.
Two small things found:
1. "...almost caught up with him (here I would put a full stop.)He then turned around..."
2. ...once reached the huge doors, they swung open...
Both to clarify, not because they were faults.
I hope this helps.
Marjon.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you so very much for your great suggestions, Marjon. I'll sort those out! A big hug, my friend, for the lovely 6 stars that you've given me with your fabulous review. I really do appreciate it all and you. Thank you! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Wow, What an imagination you have, Sandra. I think this story is going to be most interesting of all done so far! I have no idea where you might go from here, but I will be there with you. GOOD JOB! Nancy:)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Wow, What an imagination you have, Sandra. I think this story is going to be most interesting of all done so far! I have no idea where you might go from here, but I will be there with you. GOOD JOB! Nancy:)
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you so very much for this fabulous review and all those stars, my wonderful friend. I'm so pleased you're coming along with me on this adventure. I can have fun with this story, no one can tell me it didn't happen that way! lol. Biggest hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Don't forget to keep me updated on your eyes. Love you lots. xx
Comment from country ranch writer
Will be waiting for more on this adventure,p. It wS to much for the boy to take in all at once everyone wanting him to answer there questions all at once.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Will be waiting for more on this adventure,p. It wS to much for the boy to take in all at once everyone wanting him to answer there questions all at once.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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I tried to put myself in that position, how would I cope with all those voices in my head? I think I'd go mad if it kept up. Thank you so very much for the 6 stars, and the lovely review, my friend. I'm so pleased you'll be back for more! Big hugs, Sandra xxx
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Will be waiting hoping he can clear his mind